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Memoirs of Mourning You

Your childhood abode left scars unhealed that I yearned to kiss and make better. That sense of abandonment I recognized As I too grew up feeling unwanted, unloved. I beheld the tenderness in your sweet soul The way you showered your dogs with love Melted my heart, as flames began to burn instantly. The vision of your handsome face danced in my Mind day and night with the melody of love. I knew intuitively that oneday we would be together And I would bear your children, bonding us forever. My dreams came true and I felt our damaged souls Would taste years of long-lasting redemption. Sadly I could not tame the wild spirit in you that would Venture off into unknown territories leaving me And our children behind to morn your loss. After 12 years of prayers and hopes your love faded Into a ghostly remnant of what had once felt so blissful. We both endured such pain in parting, and sorrows Followed you with a dark shroud clouding your vision. When you asked me to come back to you is now but A bittersweet memory because I found my Knight Who galloped to my rescue and cherishes only me. Sometimes love is not enough and we were not to be. 9-10-19 ~Second Place~ Sometimes love is not enough Poetry Contest Sponsor Silent One

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Date: 9/18/2019 9:27:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your poetic prowess. Thanks likewise for your kind comments... I do appreciate them a lot. God bless you.
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Date: 9/17/2019 3:06:00 PM
Connie congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/15/2019 12:08:00 AM
I'm back to say congratulations :) Blessings
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Date: 9/14/2019 2:37:00 PM
- Congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2019 1:05:00 PM
this one touches the reader with its poignancy...very well penned as well as deserving of your win...congratulations my friend :) hugs
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Date: 9/14/2019 12:13:00 PM
Sadly we cant save everyone, this is a deep and emotive take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/18/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Silent. I appreciate my second placement very much. You certainly got a wonderful assortment of entries that I am just now getting to read and enjoy. Mahalo and Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo
Date: 9/14/2019 11:50:00 AM
Connie, with whipsawed emotions and unyielding tumult you penned a moving narrative of a love that truly was not enough. Terrific write. Painful love.
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Date: 9/12/2019 8:22:00 PM
Hello Connie … your poems based on love and romance whether in positive or negative situations are so honest and truly lifelike that many see their world in your words - wonderful Connie - Lindsay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/13/2019 5:02:00 PM
They seem real because they are Lindsay. Thank you very much! : ) xxoo
Date: 9/12/2019 7:11:00 AM
Beautifully written and I hope it does great in the contest. Many prayers and happiness for the joy of having found someone just for you.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/13/2019 5:04:00 PM
Life is all about learning lessons we set up in advance for ourselves, yet we have no memory of. Thank you very much Regina. : ) xxoo
Date: 9/11/2019 3:22:00 PM
Connie, I couldn't help but think of you and your hubby while reading this exceptional poem. How happy you must be to have found your husband after enduring a relationship that failed. You and he are so blessed to have each other! A fave for me, Hon. Love, Carolyn
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/11/2019 3:56:00 PM
My husband Michael was my Knight in shining armor for sure. I wasn't looking to meet anyone and it was definitely destiny. I am happy you enjoyed my poem enough to fave Carolyn. Thank you so much. I hope you're having a great day! xxoo
Date: 9/11/2019 12:08:00 PM
Hi Sweet Connie, I read your poem . Its so full of past pain and honesty . Thank you for your email but I cannot read it. In fact , I replied but mine also wont go to you. I think that yahoo wont allow it. Suffice to know that our communties in SA are under seige. Its very bad. I am safe though and happy. Thank you being such a loyal pal. Love Jannie
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/11/2019 1:34:00 PM
I did received your last 2 emails and answered them. I hope you got my last reply? You can try soup mail too if you can't get through. Thank you my friend you are in my thoughts. xxoo
Date: 9/11/2019 4:45:00 AM
A painful experience you had Connie that happens to many. Thankfully things went the other way for you and loves flame is aglow once more. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/18/2019 2:22:00 PM
My son and daughter from that marriage will never make me sorry or make me feel that union was a mistake or failure. It just was not meant for us to remain together the rest of our lives. Thank you very much Tom. xxoo
Date: 9/10/2019 5:40:00 PM
Pheromones rule the roost when one is young, but the day-to-day blows of reality usually result in getting one's act together. Some losers, like Donald Trump, never mature, so it is never worthwhile heeding a call to return because pheromones won't pay the rent! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/18/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Rico. Wisdom comes from experience and those who learn never repeat the same mistakes. Aloha, Connie xxoo
Date: 9/10/2019 4:40:00 PM
Such a powerful piece Connie, full of deep drama that keeps one holding onto every line and your final line sums it up. Blessings,Gordon
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/18/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon. I am happy you enjoyed it. Though in my distant past my memories remain. xxoo
Date: 9/10/2019 3:49:00 PM
Hi Connie, another excellent write for the contest. There are many different sides to love and you have had your share. In the end things turned out right for you. You have the man of your dreams. It is always sad to read the sad sides of love but then, it is always a testament to love when they turn out well in the end. You always write with such depth of feeling and these feelings are passed on too the reader. A fav. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/18/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thank you for enjoying my work and always cheering me with your wonderful comments and for the fave Mike. This poem stems from real life experience and it was not easy to put into words. I appreciate your insightful comment and certainly the fave. Blessings, Connie xxoo
Date: 9/10/2019 2:26:00 PM
Excellent write Connie--bittersweet but true to life--your story tugs the heart.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/18/2019 2:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay. My memories remain clear and I am grateful for my true soul mate that continues to bring me joy and love. xxoo
Date: 9/10/2019 1:46:00 PM
- A story that many have got to taste ... not sweet, but bitter - Beautifully written, Connie - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/10/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. I agree. xxoo
Date: 9/10/2019 1:12:00 PM
This was fantastic Connie. Love sometimes isn't enough the first time around but thankfully some get a second chance. Best wishes in the contest.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/10/2019 2:09:00 PM
I agree Chris. I got that second chance and we will be married 38 Years in December. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you. xxoo
Date: 9/10/2019 1:10:00 PM
What a gorgeous write and a wonderful story! Love this one, Connie!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/10/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Caren. He did me the biggest favor because I found happiness. He has since been through two divorces and several relationships and is now alone. xxoo

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