Memoirs of Mourning You

Your childhood abode left scars unhealed
      that I yearned to kiss and make better.
 That sense of abandonment I recognized
      As I too grew up feeling unwanted, unloved.
 I beheld the tenderness in your sweet soul
      The way you showered your dogs with love 
Melted my heart, as flames began to burn instantly.

The vision of your handsome face danced in my
     Mind day and night with the melody of love.
I knew intuitively that oneday we would be together 
     And I would bear your children, bonding us forever.
My dreams came true and I felt our damaged souls
     Would taste years of long-lasting redemption.

Sadly I could not tame the wild spirit in you that would
      Venture off into unknown territories leaving me
 And our children behind to morn your loss.
     After 12 years of prayers and hopes your love faded
 Into a ghostly remnant of what had once felt so blissful.
 
We both endured such pain in parting, and sorrows
     Followed you with a dark shroud clouding your vision.
When you asked me to come back to you is now but 
      A bittersweet memory because I found my Knight 
Who galloped to my rescue and cherishes only me.
      Sometimes love is not enough and we were not to be. 

9-10-19

~Second Place~
Sometimes love is not enough Poetry Contest
Sponsor Silent One
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Agustin Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 9:27 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your poetic prowess. Thanks likewise for your kind comments... I do appreciate them a lot. God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 3:06 PM
Connie congratulations on your win
Mcintosh Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 12:08 AM
I'm back to say congratulations :) Blessings
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:37 PM
- Congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 1:05 PM
this one touches the reader with its poignancy...very well penned as well as deserving of your win...congratulations my friend :) hugs
One Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 12:13 PM
Sadly we cant save everyone, this is a deep and emotive take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Thank you very much Silent. I appreciate my second placement very much. You certainly got a wonderful assortment of entries that I am just now getting to read and enjoy. Mahalo and Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo
Gaul Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Connie, with whipsawed emotions and unyielding tumult you penned a moving narrative of a love that truly was not enough. Terrific write. Painful love.
Laurie Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Hello Connie … your poems based on love and romance whether in positive or negative situations are so honest and truly lifelike that many see their world in your words - wonderful Connie - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 5:02 PM
They seem real because they are Lindsay. Thank you very much! : ) xxoo
Mcintosh Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Beautifully written and I hope it does great in the contest. Many prayers and happiness for the joy of having found someone just for you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 5:04 PM
Life is all about learning lessons we set up in advance for ourselves, yet we have no memory of. Thank you very much Regina. : ) xxoo
Devonshire Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Connie, I couldn't help but think of you and your hubby while reading this exceptional poem. How happy you must be to have found your husband after enduring a relationship that failed. You and he are so blessed to have each other! A fave for me, Hon. Love, Carolyn
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:56 PM
My husband Michael was my Knight in shining armor for sure. I wasn't looking to meet anyone and it was definitely destiny. I am happy you enjoyed my poem enough to fave Carolyn. Thank you so much. I hope you're having a great day! xxoo
Breedt Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 12:08 PM
Hi Sweet Connie, I read your poem . Its so full of past pain and honesty . Thank you for your email but I cannot read it. In fact , I replied but mine also wont go to you. I think that yahoo wont allow it. Suffice to know that our communties in SA are under seige. Its very bad. I am safe though and happy. Thank you being such a loyal pal. Love Jannie
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 1:34 PM
I did received your last 2 emails and answered them. I hope you got my last reply? You can try soup mail too if you can't get through. Thank you my friend you are in my thoughts. xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 4:45 AM
A painful experience you had Connie that happens to many. Thankfully things went the other way for you and loves flame is aglow once more. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:22 PM
My son and daughter from that marriage will never make me sorry or make me feel that union was a mistake or failure. It just was not meant for us to remain together the rest of our lives. Thank you very much Tom. xxoo
Leffanta Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Pheromones rule the roost when one is young, but the day-to-day blows of reality usually result in getting one's act together. Some losers, like Donald Trump, never mature, so it is never worthwhile heeding a call to return because pheromones won't pay the rent! Well done! Aloha! Rico
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Thank you Rico. Wisdom comes from experience and those who learn never repeat the same mistakes. Aloha, Connie xxoo
Mcconnell Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Such a powerful piece Connie, full of deep drama that keeps one holding onto every line and your final line sums it up. Blessings,Gordon
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Thank you very much Gordon. I am happy you enjoyed it. Though in my distant past my memories remain. xxoo
Raven Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Hi Connie, another excellent write for the contest. There are many different sides to love and you have had your share. In the end things turned out right for you. You have the man of your dreams. It is always sad to read the sad sides of love but then, it is always a testament to love when they turn out well in the end. You always write with such depth of feeling and these feelings are passed on too the reader. A fav. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:06 PM
Thank you for enjoying my work and always cheering me with your wonderful comments and for the fave Mike. This poem stems from real life experience and it was not easy to put into words. I appreciate your insightful comment and certainly the fave. Blessings, Connie xxoo
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:26 PM
Excellent write Connie--bittersweet but true to life--your story tugs the heart.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Thank you very much Vijay. My memories remain clear and I am grateful for my true soul mate that continues to bring me joy and love. xxoo
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:46 PM
- A story that many have got to taste ... not sweet, but bitter - Beautifully written, Connie - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. I agree. xxoo
Green Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:12 PM
This was fantastic Connie. Love sometimes isn't enough the first time around but thankfully some get a second chance. Best wishes in the contest.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:09 PM
I agree Chris. I got that second chance and we will be married 38 Years in December. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you. xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:10 PM
What a gorgeous write and a wonderful story! Love this one, Connie!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Thank you Caren. He did me the biggest favor because I found happiness. He has since been through two divorces and several relationships and is now alone. xxoo
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