Memoire Cherie

Funny how a fragrance can hold
                          such a precious memory
Yet, every time I simply touch the small pink box,
its tattered lid barely concealing the bottle,
 I am flooded with love,
                           with the deepest warmth,
with so many feelings, all at once

It was my grandmother’s favorite
because I had given it to her
                                           as a small boy
                     A simple Christmas present
One that became her signature
                         One that became an annual event

And though all that’s left now is an empty vessel
And the remaining scent is so faint.
                     I savor each visit

For when that sweet floral is recognized,
           I can still see her face and catch the gleam
                     of her crystal blue eyes
I can almost hear her gentle voice saying,
thank you,
     just the way she did upon opening my last gift
of “Memoire Cherie”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 4:00 PM
Scents, especially when faded, can bring back such beautiful nostalgia, Mike, as your moving and exceptional poem lovingly expresses. Lovely emotions and imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Indeed, it is comforting, Mike.. thank you for the beautiful sentimentality of your poem..
Gentile Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much Susan. I always appreciate your kindness and lovely words. It always helps when we find that we are not alone in our feelings xxoo
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December 3, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Well deserved first place win with this touching poem about your Grandmother, Congratulations, Mike. Warm wishes~Warren
Gentile Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Thanks so much Warren xxoo
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:06 PM
A wonderful well written deeply moving poem, Mike, congratulations on your 1st place win.
Gentile Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Thanks so much Eve xxoo
Sands Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Congratulations for your win Mike ! :)
Gentile Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Th anks Heidi, Happy Sunday xxoo
Pandit Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Back with congrats on your top win, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Thanks so much Vijay!!
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December 1, 2018 at 11:14 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, Mike :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Thanks Anne- Lise and a happy weekend to you xxoo
One Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Beautiful poem about your grandmother Mike, touching and sentimental.. Memories like these last forever.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Gentile Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 4:42 PM
Thanks so much Silent One, I am so happy that you liked it !!!
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November 28, 2018 at 2:05 AM
Lovely memories Mike that stay with you forever. Tom.
Gentile Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Yes indeed, Thanks Tom !!
Roper Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Wonderful write with the things that bring back memories , Mike . Good luck in the contest.
Gentile Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Thanks so much Eve xxoo
Green Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Wow, this was beautiful and so heart touching. I lost my grandmother so many years ago but still I think about her often. Really nicely done. best of luck in the contest
Gentile Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Thanks so much Chris, I really appreciate your kind words!!
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:32 PM
This is so nice Mike. Meaningful and special to hold onto just like that small pink box :)
Gentile Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, I will keep it forever xxoo
Pandit Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:29 PM
You wrote a poem that tugs the heart and evokes tears in eyes. A special rendering of love and memories..excellent poem..best for a TOP win, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Thank you Vijay for your kind words, Happy Tuesday !!!
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November 27, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Mike, your poem touched my heart deeply as I know how special a fragrance can be. For years after he died, I kept my husbands shirts in the closet as they had his favorite scent, Aramis. Gosh, you took me back to the bottle of cheap perfume I gave my Mom when I was five and the more expensive Chloe that remained for me to find when she died. Tears. So beautiful!
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November 27, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thank you so much Carolyn, I am so happy that it resonated with you and perhaps brought a sweet memory to mind xxoo
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