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3d music bot that makes hearts swoon
Is what I’d leave melodies on the moon

Musical notes float like a magical mirror
Reflecting views of places applicable to each song
The notes can gather and form a body that dances
Or dissolve like sand to create lands sang about

For instance a song about the sea would be watery
The notes would create an ocean with sandy floor
Coral and sea critters swim in harmony with notes
The same notes that glow when played

Or the music may stop as an audio bops of
A jazz or opera singer pauses for emphasis 
The view would be of anyone anything
Related to musical production 3d limitless 

First a low lone bell chimes to alert the mind
Of a melody about to unwind like a clocks time
Then strings blend like a waterfall of rhythm 
Coloring each note as a glowing universal ghost

Ghosts of civilization past present and future
Each song moves along melting into the next
Which could be a country song or a monk chanting
The magical notes twirl and float melting into the end
For it softly samples all music with minds open

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Date: 4/9/2025 1:50:00 PM
Sensational ideas, Karen. Certainly better than 'historic editions' of the NY Times or transcripts of "Bloopers of Presidents of the 21st Century." lol. Keep smiling, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/9/2025 1:55:00 PM
lol hugs Gershon!

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