Memento on the moon

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Memento on the Moon Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Suzette Richards
04/22/2025

Leave the ground to fly upward forever a quintillion atoms blasting astray It’s April 20, Crack open an Easter egg be careful not to drop, if a Fabergé Celebrate Apollo 16, NASA’s high point also light a candle down Columbine way Luna doesn’t judge beyond her influence so can’t be complicit in the price we pay Deepwater horizon, fades into distance not to mention some Dictator’s birthday What marks a memento of lasting impact? recurring dates in an almanac of ricochets? Every once in a phase, flies by April 20 she turns her face, but cannot look away.

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Ink Empress

Date: 4/23/2025 3:50:00 AM

Dear david What a deeply thought provoking poem this is, for some reason im a cynical person and i find it so hard to believe anyones been on the moon or can visit the moon (hope i don’t sound stupid) but moon never judges and listens to so many and in darkness she shines! And this poem with lines such as “ not to mention some Dictator’s birthday What marks a memento of lasting impact? recurring dates in an almanac of ricochets?” strong and powerful questions youv delivered there dear david! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/23/2025 5:44:00 AM

Heya Ink! I certainly won’t try convert you to believe in something you have doubts about, there’s some cosmological theories I find hard to understand myself; this one is more about dates coinciding or overlapping, and if the universe is trying to tell us something, thought it might be an interesting direction to come at the contest, but who knows if it will capture the attention of the sponsor, you’re certainly not stupid to be cynical of mankind’s history, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/22/2025 1:51:00 PM

Almost aligned to the God contest David with the benign witnessing... A very clever approach utilising the significance of the date. A very gentle squaring up to the moon - or maybe I've just had three gin and tonics lol

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/22/2025 2:35:00 PM

Possibly under the influence of 3 G&Ts Dilly Yay! Lol! you read my poem well, kind of comes at the moon from a different angle of approach and perspective, on the ups and downs of April 20, there’s something eerily significant about that date, threading a lot of human history together, thanks for stopping by, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 4/22/2025 1:31:00 PM

Thank God Luna doesn't judge, or she'd have turned her dark side on us long ago. For leaving so much trash on her, she could've easily stopped the ebb and flow of tides. But at least we'd no longer have to fear werewolves showing up on full moon nights. Seriously nice history lesson, David. And if the US ever returns, they should take that flag home with them. The moon is not owned by anyone. hmmm Trump might want to tariff her light.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/22/2025 2:22:00 PM

Haha, you’re not far wrong with Trump putting tariffs on the moon Lin, lunacy seems to be the order of the day in DC, April 20 does seem to have quite an explosive past throughout history, I can remember a more personal one that possibly gave me the idea for this piece, thanks for your thoughts, cheers David

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/22/2025 9:15:00 AM

very true David the moon is a magic lady and you do her proud hugs Shadow

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/22/2025 9:37:00 AM

I believe she’s there for a cosmological/spiritual reason Shadow, thanks so much for waxing on the proud comment, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/22/2025 9:04:00 AM

Your "Memento on the moon" was a fun read. I enjoyed it. Great Picture... "Good Luck" Have a great spring day..............

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/22/2025 9:32:00 AM

Heya Paula, thanks so much for stopping by with kind comments, so glad you enjoyed, cheers David