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For Contest sponsored by Suzette Richards

3d music bot that makes hearts swoon Is what I’d leave melodies on the moon Notes that float fly and dance Or form pottery and art by hands Yellow notes would boast so happily Creating joy and hope as if laughing Floating souls like white water tranquility A kaleidoscope of colors moving dreams Notes that are heard with silver soul Like a hummingbird at a feeder glows Fast and slow melodies ring like bell Coasting in hearts like boat with sail Yes a music bot that could act as a magic mirror And a moving art that allows views to the hearer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 4/23/2025 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations sweet Karen! This is familiar and certainly heard and understood by anything or anyone -music- you put some thought into this so beautifully--i think ~
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/23/2025 1:02:00 PM
Thanks dear poetess! You are kind!
Date: 4/23/2025 3:52:00 AM
A delightful futuristic art in the form of a 3D music bot perfectly embraces the contest brief of a Notional Ekphrasis. The reference to the colour yellow (one we often associate with the moon viewed from Earth) is rather compelling as it is a colour that is associated with being mentally activating, psychologically stimulating higher cognition, intuition, creativity, and feelings of optimism. … Thank you for your support, Karen
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/23/2025 6:41:00 AM
Suzette I appreciate the placing in your fun contest! The prompt was creative and inspiring as well as a challenge! Thanks!
Date: 4/18/2025 8:29:00 AM
This is good writing. I'm a fan of your style. Please keep putting out your work.
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/18/2025 11:10:00 AM
Aw that is so sweet Michael! I just left the gym and I’m exhausted! lol haven’t felt like writing much lately. Thanks for your kind words!
Date: 4/15/2025 3:55:00 AM
Beautifully composed, Karen:-) Best of luck in the contest!
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/15/2025 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Edward! Competition is steep!
Date: 4/13/2025 1:47:00 AM
How beautiful is this sweet Karen, i love the rhythm and flow of your word weaving and how youv written one that is very unique and different to others takes! I especially love the last two lines! Powerful! And also the opening! Caught my eyes! I love a moon poem always! Best wishes in the contest! Pleasure reading your poem today.
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/13/2025 6:20:00 AM
Thank you dearest Inky!
Date: 4/11/2025 12:36:00 AM
This is so creative. The contest looks scary to me. I should study it out and see what exactly people are doing!
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/18/2025 6:55:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! Don’t give up!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/17/2025 11:05:00 PM
Hope you will place. I simply can't do this one.
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/11/2025 1:23:00 AM
It was a challenge and I don’t think I will place lol. But it made me think! Thanks
Date: 4/10/2025 4:01:00 PM
This is beautiful, Karen. It is ... CayCay
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/10/2025 5:15:00 PM
Thanks you are kind CayCay!
Date: 4/9/2025 1:51:00 PM
As they say: "We're all in this together, in the same bot." lol. ~ Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/9/2025 1:57:00 PM
lol thanks for the laugh!

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