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For Moon Contest sponsored by Seth Pina

 

 

Memento on the Moon

3d music bot that makes hearts swoon
Is what I’d leave melodies on the moon
Notes that float fly and dance
Or form pottery and art by hands

Yellow notes would boast so happily 
Creating joy and hope as if laughing
Floating souls like white water tranquility 
A kaleidoscope of colors moving dreams

Notes that are heard with silver soul 
Like a hummingbird at a feeder glows
Fast and slow melodies ring like bell
Coasting in hearts like boat with sail

Yes a music bot that could act as a magic mirror
And a moving art that allows views to the hearer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Anaya Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations sweet Karen! This is familiar and certainly heard and understood by anything or anyone -music- you put some thought into this so beautifully--i think ~
Jones Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Thanks dear poetess! You are kind!
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 3:52 AM
A delightful futuristic art in the form of a 3D music bot perfectly embraces the contest brief of a Notional Ekphrasis. The reference to the colour yellow (one we often associate with the moon viewed from Earth) is rather compelling as it is a colour that is associated with being mentally activating, psychologically stimulating higher cognition, intuition, creativity, and feelings of optimism. … Thank you for your support, Karen
Jones Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 6:41 AM
Suzette I appreciate the placing in your fun contest! The prompt was creative and inspiring as well as a challenge! Thanks!
Maul Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 8:29 AM
This is good writing. I'm a fan of your style. Please keep putting out your work.
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Aw that is so sweet Michael! I just left the gym and I’m exhausted! lol haven’t felt like writing much lately. Thanks for your kind words!
Ibeh Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Beautifully composed, Karen:-) Best of luck in the contest!
Jones Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 11:15 AM
Thanks Edward! Competition is steep!
Empress Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 1:47 AM
How beautiful is this sweet Karen, i love the rhythm and flow of your word weaving and how youv written one that is very unique and different to others takes! I especially love the last two lines! Powerful! And also the opening! Caught my eyes! I love a moon poem always! Best wishes in the contest! Pleasure reading your poem today.
Jones Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Thank you dearest Inky!
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 12:36 AM
This is so creative. The contest looks scary to me. I should study it out and see what exactly people are doing!
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 6:55 PM
Thanks Andrea! Don’t give up!
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 11:05 PM
Hope you will place. I simply can't do this one.
Jones Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 1:23 AM
It was a challenge and I don’t think I will place lol. But it made me think! Thanks
Godwin Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 4:01 PM
This is beautiful, Karen. It is ... CayCay
Jones Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 5:15 PM
Thanks you are kind CayCay!
Wolf Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 1:51 PM
As they say: "We're all in this together, in the same bot." lol. ~ Gershon
Jones Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 1:57 PM
lol thanks for the laugh!
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