Memento of Waters

Gently gurgling waves of water 
Slip, trip and twirl while dressed 
Sky blue; 
Transfixed I soaked, fly in amber 
Moment in time impressed 
With hue. 








Note:fly in amber -noun; reminder of the past


Your Best Poem #2
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
11 March 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 1:42 PM
This is so amazingly lovely! Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Kim! Have a nice day! Pandita
Torres Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Hi dear.. Congratulations on your high placement in Shadow's contest !!! :)
Ryerson Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Not only have a read an elegant and beautifully written verse but have learned something new in the process (fly in amber) Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order my friend -------------PS: Go directly to my fav poets list, do NOT pass go...
Y. Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Kim, congratulations on your 1st place win :-)Alexis
A. Sharma Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Great pen! congrats on top place win Kim!
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Kim, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:41 PM
congrats on 1st place Kim with this delight and refreshing poem hugs
De La Luna Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 1:45 AM
Congratulations!!! This is fantastic dear lovely Kim! Can't believe I missed this!
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 10:19 PM
very nice and good to see it! Congrats for your win.
Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 1:41 PM
Congrats!!Sara
Roper Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Congratulations on your win,Kim, beautiful written.A 7 Blessings and hugs Eve
Richards Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:32 AM
This is done so beautifully ! Congrats on your wonderful win !!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 12:15 AM
Congrats on your first place win, Kim! I'm honored to share the spot with you...just saw your reply below. I'm feeling much better this week. Thanks for asking...you're so sweet...hugs, Rhonda
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Thank you for sharing my joy, Rhonda. I thank God and I thank Nette for sponsoring the contest. I'm more than honored..haha. Aww...thank you for saying that. Hugs!Kim :)
May Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Congrats on a great win Patrice
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 6:59 AM
Thank you for sharing my joy, Joseph. I thank God and Nette for sponsoring the contest. Blessings to you! Kim :)
Ebbs Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:45 PM
Congrats on you win! :)
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 6:16 AM
Thank you, Ed, for sharing my joy. I thank God for this and Nette for sponsoring the contest. We're both on the winners' list! Smiles from the isles...Kim :)
Shaw Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Congratulations Kim on your top win!! Excellence exhibited in this pleasing write. Love it. Hugs, Kimberly
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 6:11 AM
Thank you, for sharing my joy, my dear tukaya (Filipino word for someone who has the same name as you). I thank the Lord for this and Nette for sponsoring the contest. I wish you a lovely day! Hugs! :)
Hamilton Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 5:28 PM
superb Kim congrats on win hugs 7
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 6:43 AM
Thank you for sharing my joy, Shadow. I thank God for this and Nette for sponsoring the contest. We're both on the winners' list! Thank you for the vist and the 7. Hugs! Kim :)
La France Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Kim, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with this beautiful poem, a perfect 7 . . .
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 5:24 AM
Thank you Broken, for sharing my joy. Appreciate your being here and the 7. Hugs!
Onclaud Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 4:06 PM
you convey such a delicate tone and voice in your work. kim...having you in my contest was a pleasure; big congrats!.. huggs
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 5:22 AM
Oh my, Nettie! I sure was dreaming of getting a place but didn't imagine this! This is such an honor for me. I thank God and you, for this. It was a pleasure writing the memento and joining your contest as well. Hugs! Kim :)
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 5:13 AM
Wow, Jan! Thanks! My first top tier! Happy that you share my joy, dear friend! Hugs! Kim :)
Devnath  Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:54 AM
Beautiful poem painted with beautiful ink. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl
Pinet Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Your descriptive wording and great imagery brought the scene to life. Emile.
Meade Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 12:39 PM
The sounds of water filled my heart with joy while I soared in the blue sky. I shared your moment -- sweet it was!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Lovely flowing words of water and colorful sky...best wishes and hugs, Rhonda
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