Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Verse

Memento of Waters

Tides pull you into waters clear,
cupping both hands, she tastes
your pain. 

Her lustrous foam draws briny tears;
waves sigh in seas retraced,
then wane.


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 3/10/15
for Nette's Memento of Waters Contest
visual #4

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Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2015 at 10:20 PM reading this a second time, I am even more impressed. Congrats for a well deserved win.

Eve Roper March 27, 2015 at 2:26 PM Rhonda, congratulations on your win in the contest. a 7

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2015 at 1:43 PM Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats!!Sara

Carrie Richards March 27, 2015 at 9:34 AM Congratulations, Rhonda ! This is done so well, such emotion and nature entwined !Hooray for you and your talented pen!!!

Edward Ebbs March 26, 2015 at 8:46 PM Congrats Rhonda :)

Kim Shaw March 26, 2015 at 8:14 PM Big congratulations Rhonda! Captivating poem. I really enjoyed it. Hugs, Kimberly

Sandra Haight March 26, 2015 at 6:44 PM Congratulations on your podium win, Rhonda! Beautifully done! Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 5:30 PM exhilarating poem Rhonda congrats on win hugs 7

Robert Stoner Jr March 26, 2015 at 4:35 PM Congratulations on this win Rhonda, great write, I need a Dramamine :o)

Constance La France March 26, 2015 at 4:34 PM Rhonda, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with this beautiful poem, a perfect 7 . . .

Nette Onclaud March 26, 2015 at 4:17 PM i thoroughly like the push and pull effect of your imagery, Rhonda.. thank you for being part of my contest... congrats big-time and huggs

Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 3:42 PM Beautiful imagery Rhonda many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser March 26, 2015 at 3:40 PM Beautiful imagery and expression is seen throughout your lovely poem, Rhonda. Congrats on your win!

Dorian Petersen Potter March 11, 2015 at 5:47 AM Very nice pen Rhoda! enjoyed your verses, my dear friend. Wish you best in the contest! A 7 from me! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2015 at 6:09 PM very nicely done. I love reading this form!

Tim Smith March 10, 2015 at 1:58 PM Outstanding piece Rhonda. It drew me in...a7

Poesy Relish March 10, 2015 at 11:22 AM wonderful Rhonda... sure to be a winner #7... best wishes, nad

Richard Lamoureux March 10, 2015 at 9:01 AM I expect this will do very well, it is a masterful piece.

Frederic Parker March 10, 2015 at 7:33 AM A strong entry my poetic friend...to taste hurt is a powerful line...good luck

Njeri Hunjeri March 10, 2015 at 1:22 AM I enjoyed the write. All the best in the contest.