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Memento of Waters

Tides pull you into waters clear, cupping both hands, she tastes your pain. Her lustrous foam draws briny tears; waves sigh in seas retraced, then wane. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 3/10/15 for Nette's Memento of Waters Contest visual #4

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Date: 3/28/2015 10:20:00 PM
reading this a second time, I am even more impressed. Congrats for a well deserved win.
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Date: 3/27/2015 2:26:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win in the contest. a 7
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Date: 3/27/2015 1:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats!!Sara
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Date: 3/27/2015 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Rhonda ! This is done so well, such emotion and nature entwined !Hooray for you and your talented pen!!!
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Date: 3/26/2015 8:46:00 PM
Congrats Rhonda :)
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Date: 3/26/2015 8:14:00 PM
Big congratulations Rhonda! Captivating poem. I really enjoyed it. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/26/2015 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium win, Rhonda! Beautifully done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/26/2015 5:30:00 PM
exhilarating poem Rhonda congrats on win hugs 7
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on this win Rhonda, great write, I need a Dramamine :o)
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:34:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with this beautiful poem, a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:17:00 PM
i thoroughly like the push and pull effect of your imagery, Rhonda.. thank you for being part of my contest... congrats big-time and huggs
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Date: 3/26/2015 3:42:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Rhonda many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/26/2015 3:40:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and expression is seen throughout your lovely poem, Rhonda. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/11/2015 5:47:00 AM
Very nice pen Rhoda! enjoyed your verses, my dear friend. Wish you best in the contest! A 7 from me! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D
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Date: 3/10/2015 6:09:00 PM
very nicely done. I love reading this form!
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Date: 3/10/2015 1:58:00 PM
Outstanding piece Rhonda. It drew me in...a7
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Date: 3/10/2015 11:22:00 AM
wonderful Rhonda... sure to be a winner #7... best wishes, nad
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:01:00 AM
I expect this will do very well, it is a masterful piece.
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Date: 3/10/2015 7:33:00 AM
A strong entry my poetic friend...to taste hurt is a powerful line...good luck
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Date: 3/10/2015 1:22:00 AM
I enjoyed the write. All the best in the contest.
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