Melting Walls of Love- Hiku 21-
Written: June 20, 2025, for contest sponsored by Brian Strand
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claustrophobic h e a r t
pounds beneath a
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b
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s
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r~
no escape from l
o v
e
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alabaster w a l l s
melt b e n e a t h your whispered n
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m
e~
l
o v
e breaks every lock
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