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Rick Parises's Haiku Contest   12/01/24

down the mountain side glaciers calving in meltdown ~ sweltering planet

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Date: 12/3/2024 5:57:00 AM
Lin, interesting verb for the pieces breaking off. That's about as nice a way to phrase this as possible. It's the birth of a new era that will usher in a lot of pain for some more than others. For any of us with empathy pain will occur.
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Date: 12/2/2024 12:28:00 AM
Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 12/2/2024 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Lady K.
Date: 12/2/2024 12:18:00 AM
great poem , i am scared of future
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Date: 12/2/2024 10:17:00 AM
We should be. Thanks, Yann.
Date: 12/1/2024 8:17:00 PM
Good one! Indeed I have seen the effects of glacier melting since I revisited a particular glacier in Alaska. Very interesting!
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Date: 12/2/2024 10:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Kim. I cruised Glacier Bay last September and they were smaller than I'd imagined.
Date: 12/1/2024 6:19:00 PM
Man is to blame for such a sad state of affairs Lin and we will see more of these disasters in years to come:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2024 6:24:00 PM
Unfortunately, you’re right. Thanks Jan.

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