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Meltdown

Meltdown Put chocolate in your pocket on a warm summer day, Then gracefully try to unwrap it and you’ll find there is no way!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/1/2013 8:19:00 AM
Ha! Ain't that the truth, cute John
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John Posey
Date: 9/1/2013 10:31:00 AM
Yeah, wet kisses take on a whole new meaning here.... Jake
Date: 7/9/2013 8:43:00 PM
Ohh....a double melt down, very cool! I have this imagine of my sister having a melt down trying to unwrap her melted chocolate...LOL. Hugs
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John Posey
Date: 7/10/2013 3:55:00 AM
aaaaahh, thanks Cecilia, but I did not make the cut with this one...Oh well... disappointment can morph into creativity.... This one will live to melt another day.... Hugs back atcha.... Jake
Date: 7/7/2013 7:11:00 AM
Loved this one from you my friend.Clever I agree.Sending greetings your way buddy.
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John Posey
Date: 7/7/2013 8:46:00 AM
Thanks for the kudos. You are welcome to visit at any time....Jake
Date: 7/6/2013 11:04:00 PM
with just simple two lines of a simple task express a deep meaning. Thank you for sharing your experience
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John Posey
Date: 7/7/2013 7:32:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comment.... Jake
Date: 7/5/2013 10:17:00 PM
hey john, just coming back to say hello. And I got your message down here!!
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John Posey
Date: 7/6/2013 4:03:00 AM
It's always great to be greeted by an angel... Hello right backatcha.... Have a great weekend.... You've already made mine.... Jake
Date: 7/5/2013 5:06:00 PM
Bittersweet, I'm a choc-a-holic. Lol, Warm Smiles, Connie
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John Posey
Date: 7/5/2013 5:56:00 PM
I thank you, dearie. your amusement is reward enough for me.... Jake
Date: 7/5/2013 10:49:00 AM
this occurs all the time... even with m& m's which are supposes to melt in mouthh, not in your hands... oh , your words melt wonders, john!..:) huggs
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nette onclaud
Date: 7/7/2013 11:03:00 AM
oops, ' supposed'... thanks, john...:)
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John Posey
Date: 7/5/2013 11:36:00 AM
Nette, dear friend, I am always thrilled to see your sweet avatar bringing such encouraging comments. You are a real peach..... Love ya dearly.... Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 7:00:00 PM
Hi john, What a meltdown,, I love it:0) goodluck!!...cheriex
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 7:16:00 PM
Thanks, Cherie. It's great to hear from you... Your comments are appreciated.... Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 5:34:00 PM
john, I hope you won't mind but I am going to try to do an M and M poem based on this meltdown theme. Hoping it will turn out as good as YOUR chocolate poem and I hope you won't mind me borrowing your idea of candy/ this little rhyming couplet is just SO good.
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 5:50:00 PM
When any writer inspires the master, of course It's OK for the master to proceed...... As long as you give me the prize money.... Hugs, Darlin'... Get after it!...Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 3:20:00 PM
I really hate when that happens! Good one, John. Thank you for your encouraging comments on my poems. Love, Kim
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 4:53:00 PM
Kim, I thank you for your visits and encouraging comments.... Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 2:48:00 PM
Jake, ha ha .... love the artful humor. Been there, done that :)
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 2:52:00 PM
Thanks, Karen. Your laughter brings joy to my heart. Love ya ... Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 12:43:00 PM
You made me laugh, John. Very funny :) Have a Happy Fourth!
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, dear. It's reward enough to know I brought a little humor to you... Love ya ..... Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 10:06:00 AM
hahaha, I LOVE how you chose to do this one. Wish I had thought up something clever like this.
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 12:36:00 PM
Thanks for the kudos... I always treasure anything that makes you smile.....Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 8:38:00 AM
Ha ha, very true my friend. Stick it in the freezer and try again in a few hours.
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 8:58:00 AM
You're a little late with your suggestion there, Richard. It's reached the point of ...."Who's gonna clean up this mess?".... Thanks for all your reads and comments... I truly appreciate them..... Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 8:24:00 AM
I love this one!! Such a creative and clever take on this contest :)
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend. My work gains respect with your approving comments....Jake
Date: 7/4/2013 3:43:00 AM
Been there :) Your couplet is clever as the title implies a psychological meltdown-- but I guess this chocolate couplet could cause one :)
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John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 3:55:00 AM
Oops, did I step outside the box? That's really the first thing that came to mind. Thanks for visiting, Love ya... Jake