Melt Me Like Snowflakes

Temperatures fall on this late September day She paces, thousands of times, back and forth along with the soft sounds of Lionel Ritchie playing in the old sitting room, the room where they spent many a night lying in front of a wood burning fire sipping wine and sharing plans and dreams, she peers out the large casement window in hopes to see if the mail had been delivered if there was a letter for her he was usually there by now but the snow must have slowed him down finally he has arrived. That long walk to the end of the drive bundled in her warmest jacket, scarf wrapped tightly underneath her pure white ear muffs wearing anything and everything to keep the elements at bay. finally she arrives Her heart races, and with one peek, she smiles grabs that letter and just cant wait closes her eyes and holds it close to her face she can smell his musk she can imagine his soft touch delicately she opens it up and reads : My beloved I long for the night when we can be together to run my fingers through that silky hazel hair tread my kisses down your neck rub my hands across your soft toned olive skin to slowly and passionately kiss you like a real woman needs to be kissed My beloved I can't wait for the days I can hold you tight when I can protect you pamper you make sweet love to you My beloved You are in my every thought and in my dreams I think of you before I sleep and again when I wake I can picture those salty almond eyes gazing into mine until the end of time My beloved I shall return to you shortly I L U I'm Yours Forever Tears slowly fall down her blushed cheeks The cold no longer bothers her and her sated heart and the snowflakes begin to melt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/19/2015 6:13:00 PM
This is fantastic Tim! I love the letter at the end. You need to sponsor a contest for this. It would be great and really fun to write!
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Date: 9/17/2015 4:00:00 PM
This poem made me sigh.. Its my favourite of all favourites of yours till now..Its so romanticand extremely beautiful. When snowflakes melt spring fliwers bloom and butterflies dance to the magical tune .Mesmerizing. A fav.
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:16:00 PM
Wonderful, and with a happy ending!!
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Date: 9/16/2015 2:58:00 PM
i'm buying this, tim... nothing short of sensational...so languid, lovely!.. huggs
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Date: 9/16/2015 8:07:00 AM
- "A Tim poem" of the highest quality !!!! - B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L- !!!! - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2015 6:08:00 PM
simply stunning Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2015 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Jan. I'm not ready for the snow yet but soon it will be here.
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