Melody of Dawn

Walking in the dawn, in a forest loud with sound, hear the birds within the trees! Listen to the wind, see the stream serene and free, caress a flower dew wet! ________________________ March 31, 2012 Poetry/Choka/Melody of Dawn Copyright Protected, ID 03- 411-15-31 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Contest 195, 14 lines sponsor, Brian Strand, NA, Judged 08/05/12 Featured poem week of November 25, 2012 Featured poem week of June 13, 2021
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Bangalee Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 11:04 PM
nice; yes, that's beautiful imagery
La France Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Mahtab, thank you for the compliment, peace _Constance
Inman Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 7:16 AM
Beautiful imagery BW.
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March 30, 2013 at 4:42 PM
Constance, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA
Gigno Avatar
March 26, 2013 at 9:44 PM
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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 1:19 PM
Congrats Constance on the featured write.
Horne Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 1:53 PM
love this one, Constance - I feel like I'm there. Do you remember how you once described the icicles hanging from the trees? Wonderful descriptions
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Lovely poem for a lovely scene, Constance!
Sivey Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 6:46 PM
I can hear and see everything you talked about in this wonderful Choka my friend! I really enjoyed everything within this well written poem Constance! You wrote a beautifully encased write of simple natural beauty! Great Work!!
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