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April 28, 2024
Placed 1st: Line Inspiration Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May


 

Where fleecy clouds, on rosy-quilt meandered, Motifs amethystine wowed tangerine horizon Embroidering on magenta arc, designs crimson, Beckoned by blushed-musings of marigold sun Spraying amber gold, on burnt-yellow attire, Scattering breaths sapphire, on periwinkle fire; As tunes chrysanthemum, sung of eve’s desire, Choreographing themes of dreams romantic, In symphony of colors shimmering on ripples Sprinkling twilight on tapestries of blue ocean Painting azure fabric, in aureate brushstrokes, Quivering our essence, embraced in passion. This is where we were, when first-time eyes met, When sight of love fueled embers of romance And smitten hearts spoke through lovesome glance, Admiring from bridge, sun’s glorious farewell; Where we stand today, as heart-rhythms resonate, Synchronizing with love, and melodies of sunset. Line 2: Tangerine sunsets composing chrysanthemum hymns

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Date: 5/7/2024 6:29:00 PM
Beautiful melodies of sunset Vijay, the best view of the day is when the sun is slipping away and the sky is a sight to behold. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Beryl
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Date: 5/5/2024 5:21:00 AM
Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/4/2024 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Melodies of Sunset" is a colorful write. You painted with words... Have a blessed weekend.............
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Date: 5/3/2024 5:10:00 AM
Love under a tangerine sunset. Life doesn't get any better than that. Nice verse Veej
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Date: 5/2/2024 9:02:00 PM
The colorful, memorable beauty of this poem is arresting, Vijay. I delighted in these romantic lines.
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Date: 5/2/2024 3:05:00 PM
Love, romance ,watching a sunset with the one you love….what more can you ask for Vijay!! Lovely poem! Debx
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Date: 5/2/2024 5:07:00 AM
As always, your fantastic imagery is brimming with passion and romance Vijay!! Just lovely to read! happy Thursday!
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Date: 5/1/2024 4:11:00 PM
ooh this is not only pleasing to the heart and eyes, but I think I hear music Vijay, :)
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Date: 5/1/2024 12:17:00 PM
Hello Vijay, I love and enjoyed to read this poem. so romantic. My friend. Enjoy your day.my friend Darlene/
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Date: 5/1/2024 9:42:00 AM
What a beautiful twilight love song, Vijay. Your words would make a rainbow jealous! This theme is wonderfully expressed with your carefully chosen words and images! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
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Date: 5/1/2024 9:01:00 AM
Creative lines penned. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/30/2024 3:05:00 PM
"This is where we were, when first-time eyes met, When sight of love fueled embers of romance And smitten hearts spoke through lovesome glance, Admiring from bridge, sun’s glorious farewell; Where we stand today, as heart-rhythms resonate, Synchronizing with love, and melodies of sunset" A portrait of love. Perfect! Above it all...but yet immersed.
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Date: 4/30/2024 1:06:00 PM
This definitely is a symphony of colors in the most soulful manner dear vijay! How profound is this! And so beautiful! I love the creative manner youv splashed colors and woven words in this! I think this is one of my faves again from you for so many poetic techniques used here and also for the depth of what youv expressed in a captivating flow! I love especially the opening lines and the ending as well as " This is where we were, when first-time eyes met, When sight of love—“ wow’ just impeccable! Love it! A fave this is for me!
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Date: 4/30/2024 10:51:00 AM
Vijay, there is a very interesting transition at the end of this poem to consideration of lovers. So, I'm thinking about what you wrote in a previous poem I read today about reflections on our lives. The sunset here could be an allegory for our old age. It's also funny how when we are feeling love, colors and our recollection of them appear more intense.
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Date: 4/30/2024 10:28:00 AM
Hi Vijay.. This poem is a breathtaking ode to the beauty of nature and the timeless essence of love. Through vibrant imagery and lyrical language, it paints a vivid picture of a romantic encounter amidst a stunning sunset backdrop. Best of luck in the contest, I am wondering if I have done it correctly.. time will tell..
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Date: 4/29/2024 7:00:00 PM
A ' symphony of colors shimmering on ripples. ' Such a beautiful image to behold, indeed. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. This is dreamy, romantic and breathtaking, all at the same time. My best to you, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/29/2024 1:17:00 PM
Beautifully written. Excellent vocabulary as always too. I enjoyed this today. Well done! :)
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Date: 4/29/2024 7:47:00 AM
Colorful inviting words of love and visions together intertwined dear Vijay. So many lines to hold onto. I’ve missed your poems and missed being here at Poetry Soup. Wishing you all good luck in the contest. Beautiful heartfelt words as always from your gifted pen. Susan :)
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Date: 4/29/2024 3:23:00 AM
Beckoned by blushed-musings of marigold sun: which shows how I lost my muse. Perfect imagery and great imagery and rhymes. Your last line is beautiful beyond compare.
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Date: 4/28/2024 10:05:00 PM
Wow that line inspired wonders from you!
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Date: 4/28/2024 5:25:00 PM
Your romance poem was a delight to read, Vijay. The imagery in your poem was captivating as it captured nature's splendor as well as the beauty of the couple and their relationship. I especially liked: Beckoned by blushed-musings of marigold sun Your poetic style is appealing in so many ways; I always look forward to what you write; find it brilliant and breathtaking. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 4/28/2024 12:26:00 PM
Wonderful poetry on the everlasting strength of love and romance and the serenity and splendor of nature. Skillfully portrays a couple taking in the splendor of a sunset while thinking about their relationship's history and the joys and sorrows of the present. Through the poem, you construct a beautiful picture of a sunset using rich and vivid imagery. Impressive work,dear Vijay. Words such as "amethystine," "magenta," "marigold," "amber," "sapphire," and "periwinkle" conjure up images of vibrant colors and poetic beauty.
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Date: 4/28/2024 5:41:00 AM
You paint a very romantic scene with your words Vijay, nothing more romantic than being with your loved one watching the sun go down. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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