Heidi Sands Poet Free verse

Melodic Motion

The chiming of wind chimes hanging from my porch,
Calm my soul with the soft tinkling to my ears
As the breeze moves them with melodic motion
Carrying me away from worries or perpetual thoughts
With perfect timing, as trees sway and clouds float by
Each chime beats with my heart, in this precious moment
When my life is as simple as a sweet tune from a breeze
All wrapped in what I hear, with a breath and nothing more
A place where I can rest, in Mother Nature’s chiming song

Heidi Sands

8/23/18

Placed 3rd in Wind Chime Contest.  Sponsor:  Edward Ibeh

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 19, 2018 at 2:16 PM Hello Heidi, yes that sound would be soothing. have a nice day my friend. Heidi Sands September 19, 2018 at 2:28 PM Thank you Darlene ! :) I hope you have a nice day too.

Joseph May September 18, 2018 at 9:33 PM Congrats on your poem being on the best new poems list Heidi... Heidi Sands September 19, 2018 at 4:15 AM Thanks so much Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit September 18, 2018 at 7:39 AM Congrats on your win, Heidi..and congrats for climbing up the best poem chart. Heidi Sands September 18, 2018 at 7:48 AM Thank you so much Vijay. and I hadn't realized about the best poem chart. Happy to see your comment :)

Eve Roper September 15, 2018 at 7:54 PM Nicely done, Heidi, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve Heidi Sands September 16, 2018 at 6:18 AM Thank you very much Eve :)

Robert Lindley September 7, 2018 at 4:39 PM Love it my friend. A fav too... Heidi Sands September 8, 2018 at 8:03 AM Thank you Robert. I am happy it is a Fav :)

Jan Allison September 1, 2018 at 2:41 PM such tender imagery Heidi. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Heidi Sands September 1, 2018 at 2:43 PM Thank you Jan :)

Joseph May August 30, 2018 at 9:47 AM Congrats on your win Heidi.. Heidi Sands August 30, 2018 at 10:28 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Edward Ibeh August 29, 2018 at 2:35 PM Thanks for entering my contest, Heidi!:-) A delightful read! Heartiest congratulations on your win! Heidi Sands August 29, 2018 at 3:01 PM Thank you very much Edward. I appreciate the opportunity. :)

Nette Onclaud August 27, 2018 at 12:35 PM this poem has a beautiful ring to it, heidi... you charmed me!...huggs Heidi Sands August 27, 2018 at 12:36 PM Thank you for your kind comment Nette! :)

M. L. Kiser August 26, 2018 at 2:22 PM I do love wind chimes; best of luck with this one in the contest; it's wonderful. Heidi Sands August 26, 2018 at 2:24 PM Me too. Thank you M.L. i appreciate your kind comment on this. :)

Eve Roper August 26, 2018 at 1:14 PM Nicely done, Heidi, you've shown a deep emotion in the sounds of the windchimes I enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest.. I'm still not sure if I am going to write one yet.. Hugs Eve Heidi Sands August 26, 2018 at 1:54 PM Thank you Eve. I am happy you enjoyed it. It will be nice if you decide to write one too. :)

Winged Warrior August 26, 2018 at 12:09 PM A chiming melodic poem, Hiedi...well crafted my friend...love & light...^WW^ Heidi Sands August 26, 2018 at 12:14 PM Thank you WW. My muse has not been with me lately. I appreciate your comment :)

Silent One August 26, 2018 at 11:17 AM Such tender imagery that makes the heart smile.. Lovely poem Heidi.. Heidi Sands August 26, 2018 at 11:20 AM Thank you SO. I appreciate your comment :)

Charlie Smith August 26, 2018 at 9:07 AM How soft and comforting dear Heidi, well done and best wishes... Heidi Sands August 26, 2018 at 9:33 AM Thank you so much Charlie :)

Paul Callus August 26, 2018 at 8:10 AM You project serenity and beauty with these delightful words, Heidi. A light breeze and the soft tinkling of chimes are music to the soul. Regards // paul Heidi Sands August 26, 2018 at 8:29 AM Thank you Paul. Yes, wind chimes are very relaxing. I appreciate your comments :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 25, 2018 at 11:09 AM A melodic song of nature composed by your Muse my dear friend, Heidi! Captivating! Heidi Sands August 25, 2018 at 11:18 AM Thank you Demetrios :)

Susan Ashley August 24, 2018 at 7:32 PM I was sweetly swept up by the emotional beauty of your poem Heidi. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan Heidi Sands August 25, 2018 at 7:18 AM Thank you for your kind comment Susan :)

John Gondolf August 24, 2018 at 10:57 AM A very relaxing, calming poem, Heidi, best of luck in the contest. John Heidi Sands August 24, 2018 at 3:39 PM Thank you John. I am happy to hear that :)

Vijay Pandit August 24, 2018 at 7:17 AM Soothing thoughts in rhythm of chimes..well done, Heidi..Best for a win. Heidi Sands August 24, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thank you Vijay. My muse really hasn't been with me lately lol. I appreciate your comment!

Joseph May August 23, 2018 at 3:59 PM The chimes play sweet melodies...I like the 7th line...Best wishes in the contest. Heidi Sands August 23, 2018 at 4:01 PM Yes, they do. I am happy you like that. Thank you :)