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Melodic Motion

The chiming of wind chimes hanging from my porch, Calm my soul with the soft tinkling to my ears As the breeze moves them with melodic motion Carrying me away from worries or perpetual thoughts With perfect timing, as trees sway and clouds float by Each chime beats with my heart, in this precious moment When my life is as simple as a sweet tune from a breeze All wrapped in what I hear, with a breath and nothing more A place where I can rest, in Mother Nature’s chiming song Heidi Sands 8/23/18 Placed 3rd in Wind Chime Contest. Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 9/19/2018 2:16:00 PM
Hello Heidi, yes that sound would be soothing. have a nice day my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2018 2:28:00 PM
Thank you Darlene ! :) I hope you have a nice day too.
Date: 9/18/2018 9:33:00 PM
Congrats on your poem being on the best new poems list Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2018 4:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph :)
Date: 9/18/2018 7:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Heidi..and congrats for climbing up the best poem chart.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay. and I hadn't realized about the best poem chart. Happy to see your comment :)
Date: 9/15/2018 7:54:00 PM
Nicely done, Heidi, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2018 6:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve :)
Date: 9/7/2018 4:39:00 PM
Love it my friend. A fav too...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/8/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Robert. I am happy it is a Fav :)
Date: 9/1/2018 2:41:00 PM
such tender imagery Heidi. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/1/2018 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 8/30/2018 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 8/29/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Heidi!:-) A delightful read! Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2018 3:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Edward. I appreciate the opportunity. :)
Date: 8/27/2018 12:35:00 PM
this poem has a beautiful ring to it, heidi... you charmed me!...huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/27/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment Nette! :)
Date: 8/26/2018 2:22:00 PM
I do love wind chimes; best of luck with this one in the contest; it's wonderful.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2018 2:24:00 PM
Me too. Thank you M.L. i appreciate your kind comment on this. :)
Date: 8/26/2018 1:14:00 PM
Nicely done, Heidi, you've shown a deep emotion in the sounds of the windchimes I enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest.. I'm still not sure if I am going to write one yet.. Hugs Eve
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2018 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Eve. I am happy you enjoyed it. It will be nice if you decide to write one too. :)
Date: 8/26/2018 12:09:00 PM
A chiming melodic poem, Hiedi...well crafted my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2018 12:14:00 PM
Thank you WW. My muse has not been with me lately. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 8/26/2018 11:17:00 AM
Such tender imagery that makes the heart smile.. Lovely poem Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thank you SO. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 8/26/2018 9:07:00 AM
How soft and comforting dear Heidi, well done and best wishes...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie :)
Date: 8/26/2018 8:10:00 AM
You project serenity and beauty with these delightful words, Heidi. A light breeze and the soft tinkling of chimes are music to the soul. Regards // paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Paul. Yes, wind chimes are very relaxing. I appreciate your comments :)
Date: 8/25/2018 11:09:00 AM
A melodic song of nature composed by your Muse my dear friend, Heidi! Captivating!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/25/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios :)
Date: 8/24/2018 7:32:00 PM
I was sweetly swept up by the emotional beauty of your poem Heidi. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/25/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment Susan :)
Date: 8/24/2018 10:57:00 AM
A very relaxing, calming poem, Heidi, best of luck in the contest. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2018 3:39:00 PM
Thank you John. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 8/24/2018 7:17:00 AM
Soothing thoughts in rhythm of chimes..well done, Heidi..Best for a win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. My muse really hasn't been with me lately lol. I appreciate your comment!
Date: 8/23/2018 3:59:00 PM
The chimes play sweet melodies...I like the 7th line...Best wishes in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2018 4:01:00 PM
Yes, they do. I am happy you like that. Thank you :)

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