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Melodic Motion

The chiming of wind chimes hanging from my porch,
Calm my soul with the soft tinkling to my ears
As the breeze moves them with melodic motion
Carrying me away from worries or perpetual thoughts
With perfect timing, as trees sway and clouds float by
Each chime beats with my heart, in this precious moment
When my life is as simple as a sweet tune from a breeze
All wrapped in what I hear, with a breath and nothing more
A place where I can rest, in Mother Nature’s chiming song

Heidi Sands

8/23/18

Placed 3rd in Wind Chime Contest.  Sponsor:  Edward Ibeh

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/19/2018 2:16:00 PM Hello Heidi, yes that sound would be soothing. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/19/2018 2:28:00 PM Thank you Darlene ! :) I hope you have a nice day too.

Joseph May Date: 9/18/2018 9:33:00 PM Congrats on your poem being on the best new poems list Heidi... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/19/2018 4:15:00 AM Thanks so much Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/18/2018 7:39:00 AM Congrats on your win, Heidi..and congrats for climbing up the best poem chart. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/18/2018 7:48:00 AM Thank you so much Vijay. and I hadn't realized about the best poem chart. Happy to see your comment :)

Eve Roper Date: 9/15/2018 7:54:00 PM Nicely done, Heidi, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/16/2018 6:18:00 AM Thank you very much Eve :)

Robert Lindley Date: 9/7/2018 4:39:00 PM Love it my friend. A fav too... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/8/2018 8:03:00 AM Thank you Robert. I am happy it is a Fav :)

Jan Allison Date: 9/1/2018 2:41:00 PM such tender imagery Heidi. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/1/2018 2:43:00 PM Thank you Jan :)

Joseph May Date: 8/30/2018 9:47:00 AM Congrats on your win Heidi.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/30/2018 10:28:00 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 8/29/2018 2:35:00 PM Thanks for entering my contest, Heidi!:-) A delightful read! Heartiest congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/29/2018 3:01:00 PM Thank you very much Edward. I appreciate the opportunity. :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/27/2018 12:35:00 PM this poem has a beautiful ring to it, heidi... you charmed me!...huggs Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/27/2018 12:36:00 PM Thank you for your kind comment Nette! :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 8/26/2018 2:22:00 PM I do love wind chimes; best of luck with this one in the contest; it's wonderful. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/26/2018 2:24:00 PM Me too. Thank you M.L. i appreciate your kind comment on this. :)

Eve Roper Date: 8/26/2018 1:14:00 PM Nicely done, Heidi, you've shown a deep emotion in the sounds of the windchimes I enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest.. I'm still not sure if I am going to write one yet.. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/26/2018 1:54:00 PM Thank you Eve. I am happy you enjoyed it. It will be nice if you decide to write one too. :)

Winged Warrior Date: 8/26/2018 12:09:00 PM A chiming melodic poem, Hiedi...well crafted my friend...love & light...^WW^ Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/26/2018 12:14:00 PM Thank you WW. My muse has not been with me lately. I appreciate your comment :)

Silent One Date: 8/26/2018 11:17:00 AM Such tender imagery that makes the heart smile.. Lovely poem Heidi.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/26/2018 11:20:00 AM Thank you SO. I appreciate your comment :)

Charlie Smith Date: 8/26/2018 9:07:00 AM How soft and comforting dear Heidi, well done and best wishes... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/26/2018 9:33:00 AM Thank you so much Charlie :)

Paul Callus Date: 8/26/2018 8:10:00 AM You project serenity and beauty with these delightful words, Heidi. A light breeze and the soft tinkling of chimes are music to the soul. Regards // paul Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/26/2018 8:29:00 AM Thank you Paul. Yes, wind chimes are very relaxing. I appreciate your comments :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/25/2018 11:09:00 AM A melodic song of nature composed by your Muse my dear friend, Heidi! Captivating! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/25/2018 11:18:00 AM Thank you Demetrios :)

Susan Ashley Date: 8/24/2018 7:32:00 PM I was sweetly swept up by the emotional beauty of your poem Heidi. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/25/2018 7:18:00 AM Thank you for your kind comment Susan :)

John Gondolf Date: 8/24/2018 10:57:00 AM A very relaxing, calming poem, Heidi, best of luck in the contest. John Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/24/2018 3:39:00 PM Thank you John. I am happy to hear that :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/24/2018 7:17:00 AM Soothing thoughts in rhythm of chimes..well done, Heidi..Best for a win. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/24/2018 8:10:00 AM Thank you Vijay. My muse really hasn't been with me lately lol. I appreciate your comment!

Joseph May Date: 8/23/2018 3:59:00 PM The chimes play sweet melodies...I like the 7th line...Best wishes in the contest. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/23/2018 4:01:00 PM Yes, they do. I am happy you like that. Thank you :)