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Mellifluous Lyrical Crushing

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crushing defeat in abyss of nostalgia for overnight reminds me of you & city lulls tumult of memories from neolithic times to celebrate words of believer of love & soulmates listen to chirping of birds mellifluous sounds in perfect balance of angst & blithe similar to heartbeats when colliding of love happens & dusk unhappens smiling teasing holding hands in belatedly yin & yang in Edenic dreams psalms of spring breathlessly blossom beyond blurred verses & cursed cravings covets kissing & erupting under elysian edging achings drip in gold & cream to smitten singing a name with brilliance & limitless pleasure Written: April 04, 2023 2nd place contest winner A Brian Strand Premiere No 1206 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 4/10/2023 7:17:00 AM
Simply brilliant ! Indeed an enigmatic form hard to explicate for a person like me skilled in writing only simple verse. Congratulations on your excellent win.... dear Lasaad.
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Date: 4/9/2023 12:43:00 PM
- Excellent presentation of vocabulary, Las ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 4/8/2023 9:07:00 AM
Great composition, Sotto, congratulations:)
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Date: 4/8/2023 6:18:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your podium win, my friend.
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Date: 4/5/2023 6:03:00 AM
Yet another example of your poetic prowess my friend--- to celebrate words of believer of love soulmates... splendid words throughout!
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Date: 4/4/2023 8:25:00 PM
Oh wow! Brilliant!
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