Melanie
Whenever I look up
At the stars,
I am eternally grateful.
As even in the unfathomable
Endlessness of the universe,
I found you.
I've never written a poem before, so please comment on how I can improve it. I do not know if I chose the most meaningful points to form a new line.
Thank you!
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