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Melanie

Whenever I look up At the stars, I am eternally grateful. As even in the unfathomable Endlessness of the universe, I found you. I've never written a poem before, so please comment on how I can improve it. I do not know if I chose the most meaningful points to form a new line. Thank you!

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Date: 6/25/2017 2:39:00 AM
For a first poem this is extremely well written. It os Free Verse, if you like to choose the correct form :) Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Date: 6/24/2017 6:12:00 PM
Hi Josh, there is nothing wrong with this lovely tribute, write from the heart, your with friends on PS, so welcome, :)
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