Melancholy Sound

Standing on the top of the cliffs, overlooking : Melancholy Sound 
         The ominous black whistle of a Fairy tale; Princess Cruise Ship
In the light of blind LOVE, a smokestack wails as the smell of Death ; Abounds
       The groaning ebony whistle, evaporates into the Portals of the past
Leaving the image of Everlasting LOVE written in the sky by the Golden Rays of the Sun
                         I walk away leaving my Reminiscing  behind

             Inspired by Janette Fisher’s Contest : “ Sounds Familiar “
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 10:19 PM
vry nice, good luck in the contest
Mehta Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Good luck in the contest.
Gorelick Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 4:27 PM
Your having a great run HG..another lovely piece. I think i understand this one...Love, BG
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