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Melancholy Skies

On these days With melancholy skies I reflect on past things That stir me to sighs Of Lost opportunities Or those dear ones above Mistakes on mistakes Against those I love Gray day clouds Like a mirror to reflect Those past errors Or things of neglect Introspective views Of things I’d rather forget A vow not to repeat To cause more regret While painful to admit In a personal review Of how we travel this life Give direction on how to renew TLR 2-26-18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/21/2019 1:45:00 PM
I think it's a nice poem although I can't bring myself to write one, even when I feel it. It may be a guy thing.
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Tom Rutherford
Date: 12/20/2019 5:42:00 AM
I understand Robert. Sometimes words flow for me and sometimes... nothing! It should really be a human thing, not male or female just written from the heart. Not influenced by the social stereotypes or judgement. Thanks for the comment and happy holidays!
Date: 3/18/2018 10:52:00 AM
Hello Tom Rutherford, this poem you wrote I feel like it is written for me. Not to me. That is exactly how I feel. have a nice dsay my friend.
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