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Ink's Musings of the Mind Contest ~ 6/2/26

Melancholy Musings of the Moon

I inhaled the shadowed silence 
when the midnight sky was ghostly gray
and exhaled my thoughts in a hymnal, 
with lamenting lyrics dark and droll 
after a dreary day had taken its toll.
   In those moments of sapid solitude,
an inner calm should've soothed my soul
as the world solemnly slumbered
beneath a brooding pallid moon 
that lumbered in the saturnine sky.
   Why then, did I feel anxious and alone?

I waited in anguished anticipation
for expectant nimbus mothers to bear...
Heavy with their burdens, on the verge 
of purging offspring at the birthing hour.
   When at last the tiny drops arrived,
      I kissed the rain that had caused them pain,
         as if they were my tears, torrentially shed.
 
Thunder roused me with deafening drumming,
so terrifyingly loud that I heard myself scream.
My eyes squinted in the brilliant luminance
as the summer solstice streamed.
   I sighed, murmuring in fear, 
      "I am a dangerous dream."

I was in awe of aurora as I rose from bed,
spellbound by sunlight after a murky night.
   But in morning's dewy dawning, 
my taciturn thoughts turned to you
and daylight dimmed... 
dull and tarnished to patina gold.

You were always my radiant Ra
   and I your elusive Luna.
We are reigning celestial bodies, 
denied the desire to touch.
Heartbroken at being kept apart.
In transience of time, I whisper your name
with each breath in mourning hours 
while in melancholy musings I beseech,
    "But to be your Moon, must I wane?"
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 1:25 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Melancholy Musings of the Moon" great write again. What a pretty picture you have here. Have a great weekend with your win, Paula...............
Lane Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Thank you ever so much, Paula for your sweet comments on m poetry.
Empress Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 9:15 AM
Linnersz, this poem has all the layers of emotions that resonate with me and feels so honest and real and soulful! And what stands out for me is the way youve created metaphors and alliterations as well as the wordplay! I can tell you are a writer that weaves emotions, not just words, and knows how to deliver them in a way that would make readers feel deeply! "We are reigning celestial bodies, denied the desire to touch. Heartbroken at being kept apart." Ah, the connection amidst the ache! How deeply moving is the ending especially! And your use Of Ra! Is just so creative! If i could pick 3 faves yours would be amongst them! Pleasure reading! Thank you for supporting my contest! Congratulations on your win! Fave
Lane Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 10:02 AM
We are so entuned to our hearts, Ink. It's a pleasure to write for your contests because you read into the depth of words that feel pain, hope for love, and see beauty in colors and nature. Thank you for always making your comments honest and sincere. Hugs. ;-)
Daniel Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 6:20 AM
Lovely poem, Lin, congratulations:)
Lane Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 10:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 11:22 PM
Marvellous poem with great imagery and emotion.
Lane Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 3:43 PM
Thank you, Victor.
Parker Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 3:35 PM
what an intricate poem you have woven, Lin using the prompts provided quite well...really nice
Lane Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 3:41 PM
Your compliments are taken to heart, Frederic because I have always admired your poetic talent. Thank you. ;-)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Your "Melancholy Musings of the Moon" is a great write for a great picture. Love Both..... Great Ending... "Good Luck"  I did, "Musings of the Mind - I Kissed The Rain." Have a Lovely/Blessed Day Writing Away, Paula............
Lane Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 2:55 PM
Thank you for your kind review, Paula.
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