Melancholy Mists

I gaze at pregnant clouds outside my window
Overcast to match my inner darkness
Wind howls through trees like sadness through my soul
Melancholy mists cloak me in their soft caress.

Raindrops like chandelier prisms
Illusive rainbows reflect off crystal panes
Lazy daydreams of drifting recollections
Water color tapestries of tie dyed stains.

What went before cannot be changed
Dust motes dancing on stagnant air
Aspiration surrendered to forgotten needs
A past littered with dreams stripped bare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hoffman Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 7:31 AM
A beautifully emotive piece, Lena. Your words have a lovely flow.
Lawrence Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Dear, Lena. Thank you so much for your work. It pours out from your soul. It is marvelous to read emotions and glories so well expressed. I enjoy all your work. The colors merging with the qualitìes of your blessed experience. You're on my list to follow. Kev
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 2:48 PM
Hello Lena pate, I just read this poem. I like this poem. It will be my fav. /Darlene/
Strand Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 12:33 AM
Your words capture the mood of the writer Lena.One for my favourites to re-read again.Rgds Brian
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 4:07 PM
That is a very strong write. And the words flow freely. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane
Guzzi Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 4:03 PM
so beautifully maudlin! my! But you have the future to dream up and live! Light & Love
Bird Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 9:02 PM
A beautiful well written poem, The reader can feel your pain through these verses. Very touching Thanks you for the comment on my work, always appreciated.
Fraser Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 10:55 AM
Nice write Lena, Raindrops like chandelier prisms, Wow what a lovely line. James
Goff Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 9:13 AM
Lena, very vivid images of life, fluid write, nice! ...Jim
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