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Melancholy Memory : Forever Alone

Do remember me Hope tangled on a string Love isn't a thing Arrogance Like a fallen tree Branches and twigs wither The whole body suffers Pestilence Love is full of lies Full of hatred and despise Bringing people demise Entropy I keep on waiting For the tree to bear fruit For the fruit to ripen This patience I love you so much My reason for breathing The reason I'm living Mannequin This is my entry for the contest Melancholy Memory Pls. leave a comment after reading. :3

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Orlin Collier

Date: 5/29/2013 7:59:00 PM

I like your writing style, and thanks for the comment on my poem. whatever happened to the contest Roy did? i entered but its not up there anymore. Anyways this poem is awesome i love it :)

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/22/2013 3:42:00 AM

beautiful. all the best :)

Siza Sibiya

Date: 5/22/2013 2:28:00 AM

I love you multiple parallels Love to a tree lonelines to a puppet on a string Beautiful Peom indeed! *Standing Ovation*

Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/22/2013 3:02:00 AM

thanks to you appreciating it. It might be really confusing but if you really try to understand the essence of the writing that's when you'll understand what the author felt in writing the poem which is me of course. Thanks for the comment and God Bless!