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Melancholy Child

Melancholy child Shrouded in mystery Woeful heart; weeping Melancholy child time of innocence; haunting Draped in shadows Melancholy Child Your angel beholds Gods face your Goliath will fall

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 11:00:00 PM

I espcially loved when you said, "your goliath will fall" Nice series on this melancholy child.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/26/2011 9:21:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry today and I am sure it will bring inspiration to another poet. I love poetry that is written from the heart as I believe that is where the best poetry comes from. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with Love, Good Health and loads of Inspiration Lori. Love, Carol

Ingibo Benson

Date: 8/25/2011 6:24:00 PM

Melancholy Child-exceptional piece. Love the last senryu most. Keep writing, Lori.