Melancholy

A haunting from my past came back to see me 
that caused a misunderstanding between you and me
I cant believe this, I caused it to end, before it began,
with you as a future friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 11:00 PM
Hello Maxeen, and welcome to this site. You have a nice write here that needs one small correction: In your third line, it would be a good idea to change "begin" to "began". All of your other verbs are in past tense, so it would be a good idea to make them all the same. This writing is better than any of Sylvia's.
Dennis Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 11:50 PM
Thank you so much!
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January 30, 2012 at 12:50 AM
Umm how do I hate this let me count the ways.
Watson Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 12:44 AM
This is why I love poetry .. Good work :)
Dennis Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 1:01 AM
Thank you, for your encouragement Bry!
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