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Melancholic Tree

In the middle of winter
within misty moors,
lies a melancholic meadow.

Up above grey skies foretell
perturbed crows to seek shelter.
Down below, 
an isolated tree - naked and fatigued;
Listens in silence.
Her soul is wounded,
but you do not see her blood.

Defiant against dysfunctional adversity,
her roots are stronger than an anchor.
Diversifying in deep directions, 
kissing the mouth of the Earth. 
Her torso may seem tall and mighty,
but her appearance deceives.
Sins of mankind have exposed her sap,
as bark beetles crumble the surface.

Forceful winds and bullet rain blasts
against her weary teary face.
Her tame frame trembles, 
as naked broken branches are 
blown away by brutal gusts.

It is just another battle for life,
as birds leave her behind - suffocating. 
Raindrops stream down her body,
creating puddles of sadness,
soaking deep into her roots. 

In the middle of winter
within misty moors,
lies a melancholic meadow;
where a tree yearns for Spring.
To bloom prosperously 
and to bathe in sunshine -
so departed birds return.

Silent One
20 February 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Jayasankar Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 2:41 AM
S1, just came here to read some of your old poems. So, this was the poem I was searching for... now, as I read this, I feel how lucky am I to read such an outstanding masterpiece. A poem with all the poetic beauty... metaphors, assonance, alliteration....All aspiring poets should read this poetic gem. A fav for me to read again and again. God bless ~ Ani
Herrick Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Unbelievably Supercalifragilistic? What does one say? BOOM (wow) ~Jude
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Thank you, this is probably my best poem..
Vega Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 7:54 PM
This writing puts in mind a Willow Tree.
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Thanks...
Staton Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Love how effortlessly you describe the plight of the tree. Love your creativity and your wonderful use of words.
One Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Thank you.. This is probably my best poem..
Breidenthal Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 10:09 AM
"Her soul is wounded, but you do not see her blood" Very interesting line. I like to pick out what stands out to me, whether or not it means to be accentuated or not. "Diversifying in deep directions, kissing the mouth of the Earth. " I like that too. What tree doesn't yearn for spring? Sad one, but I love it. Always, Laura
Kane Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Never have I read a sadness quite so beautiful. Strong, powerful. Brave.
Lane  Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:43 AM
You did an excellent job of creating intense feelings with this poem.
Acrich Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:39 AM
What you did here the pic i do all day long on my goolge plus page https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-idP23bHCg&t=2232s ----------------- https://plus.google.com/u/0/+marcacrich great poem by the way , i dont read them i play it on my ginger app
Thomas Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:58 PM
S1 this is grabs my heart. It is how I feel many days. Thank you for letting me read this.
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Happy you could relate to it..
Miller  Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:56 PM
I absolutely am in love with this poem. I feel every word, every meter, every syllable. I also visit this place quite frequently. I feel less alone after feeling the feeling of your poetry. It flows right into me-MM
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Thank you Mark... I think its a place everyone goes too...
Sell Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 7:43 PM
This is really good, and I'm glad you mentioned it in a comment to me earlier today so I would think to look it up.
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Thank you Amy..
Bateman Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Hello Silent!! An extraordinary free verse here for sure my good friend. The tone, tenor, and setting of this narrative --combined with the passion and feeling of your words -- make this touching and sad poem a quite enchanting read for sure. The music is the perfect added touch too!! Superb Work -- and A FAVE!! Best Wishes, Gary
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Thank you Gary... Appreciate your feedback and visit
Hay Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Wow, simply enchanting this is matched by the melancholy music that creates an enriched sensory experience. A+ and on my favs!! Bravo, warm regards, Laura.
One Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Laura..
Leduc Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Lovely..so sad but hopeful at the end.
One Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you..
Miller  Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:22 PM
I know this place-very well. You describe it so eloquently and vividly you took me there. You touched me with your poem. I know. I truly know. Excellent poem. Fantastic.
One Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thank you Mark, I believe we have all been her at some point in our lives..
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:40 PM
Hello and so shall the birds return to the trees tochrip and be happy. have a nice evening my friend.
One Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Darlent, birds always come back when the weather is nice..
Harris Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Quite the view. A perspective to be admired. Like many of your creations . Thank You for your sharing your thoughts.
One Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Michael..
Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Such a circle of life journey to love, SO. This poem moves deep into the root of the soul. Desire to survive whatever comes our way is the cosmic imperative to thrive and love abundantly. A positive ending that inspires. Wonderful prose. Love and joy always.
One Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Freddie..
Buck Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:34 PM
S1: Where I live this could well be about most of our trees. I trust each has your trees strength and endurance to return in the spring. Thanks for sharing this lovely work with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Thank you my friend, please give those trees a hug...
Bocsa Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Wonderful as usually proving much talent and feelings in a very personal touch of melancholy as only noble soul know.I like especially the last stanza of hope like in an old famous movie: The cranes flow...
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thank you, nice to see you after so long..
Beck Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Wonderfully written!
One Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Thank you..
Ellison Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Didn't expect anything else dear friend! Only you know the true path to love and life... a gem! Cheers dear close friend!!! Happy jack
One Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Thank you..
Thompson Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 12:32 PM
A deeply moving piece.
Flower Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:10 PM
It is simply great !!!
Lindley Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:06 PM
Perfectly sad,perfectly heart-wrenching my friend. As that tree represents so many invisible people that suffer and is not seen by the outside world.. Time heals but time also destroys my friend.. A true gem.. A fav.....
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