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Melancholic Muse

Its inner self, deep dark hole of a maze, Sad stretch of dire and apathetic doom, Exacerbated when outlasts a phase, Giving the tunnel end’s lighting no room. The steel shackles along its iron grip Without a shame restraint the weary mind, Stricken under merciless lashing whip - In solitude, disabled and confined. To silence this depressing demon’s voice - To attack from all fronts and from within, Forfeiting the battle is not a choice, Only one way to rise above - to win! May 7, 2023 Sponsor: Craig Cornish Contest: Anatomy of Melancholy

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Date: 7/31/2023 7:27:00 AM
Well done Margarita, a true depiction of melancholy.
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Date: 5/10/2023 5:54:00 PM
Excellent penning, Maggie:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 5/11/2023 11:27:00 AM
Nice to see you :)
Date: 5/7/2023 11:55:00 AM
Your words ring true to my definition of melancholy, Maggie... "solitude, disabled and confined." Those are more than enough. Your thoughts are well-expressed.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 5/11/2023 11:27:00 AM
Thank you, Lin!

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