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Meg's Poem

This is a dedication to the most amazing girl I know You make me want to express the emotions I usually struggle to show You've been through the worst so you deserve the best I know that anxiety sometimes leaves us both a nervous wreck When it comes to smiles you have the loveliest How can a girl still be so beautiful after going through so much ugliness? Your heart hasn't been cherished the way it should have been It makes me want to find Cupid and leave blood on him A world with a million girls, but you're the one on my mind Even if I'm busy, I'll still give you my time When you need me, I'll be behind you I wonder if you know just how beautiful I find you I want to make you mine and be the one to erase your scars I won't go a day without telling you how beautiful you are I wish I could have been there to pick you up every time you fell Let me be your heaven and make you forget about your previous hell I wanna hold you close and kiss you all over If love is a battlefield, then for your heart I'm gonna be a soldier I want to make you happy in every way I never thought talking to a girl would be my favourite part of the day I hate how much you've been hurt before but I want to be the one to change that Give me your heart and I'll never give you pain back Millions of girls in the world, but I've never felt like this I'll go all in for you, when I'm dealt my Chips This is a poem for Meg, I hope she knows how amazing she is You're the one I want everything with I hope you begin to see how amazing you are You're the girl who I want to give all of my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/23/2017 2:20:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Alex - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Alex Duffy
Date: 11/23/2017 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, and I will try :)
Date: 11/19/2017 9:52:00 PM
What a lovely love poem. A well deserved win, Alex.
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Alex Duffy
Date: 11/21/2017 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate it
Date: 11/19/2017 6:27:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Alex, I hope your tribute to meg is appreciated:-) hugs jan xx
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Alex Duffy
Date: 11/21/2017 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, yeah Meg loved the poem :), hugs to you too xx
Date: 11/19/2017 2:13:00 PM
Hi Alex: Congratulations on your 1st place win. What a beautiful dedication you have written. There are so many great lines in it but my favorite is; If love is a battle field then for your heart I'm gonna be a soldier. Congrats again And best wishes for you and Meg.
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Alex Duffy
Date: 11/21/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thank you I appreciate it, I'm glad you liked that line, I'd had it stored in my head for a few months,but wanted to use it on the write poem. Thank you much appreciated
Date: 11/19/2017 12:45:00 PM
I can tell this poem comes from the heart. It is deserving of first placement Alex. You can be Megs knight in shining armor, come to rescue her from her pain. You have written a wonderful poem any girl would appreciate and cherish. Congratulations! : )
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Alex Duffy
Date: 11/21/2017 5:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, and I plan on being her knight in shining armour, and making her forget she's been hurt :). Thank you I appreciate it
Date: 11/19/2017 10:32:00 AM
You created such a moment in time with who these words are meant for, the depth of the truth behind the words is felt by all, congratulations
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Alex Duffy
Date: 11/21/2017 5:24:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate it, poetry is all.about truth, but I had to open my heart a lot more to post this one, I'm glad people.have liked it
Date: 11/19/2017 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Alex with this wonderful and tender touching pen. All the best to you dear poet :) much love xomo
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Alex Duffy
Date: 11/21/2017 5:22:00 PM
Thank you so much I appreciate it :) all the best to you too :)

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