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Meeting Nette Onclaud, the Verse Siren-Queen

MEETING  NETTE  ONCLAUD,    THE  VERSE   SIREN-QUEEN


Sprinkled with sparkling silver, your precious gilded  lines, dear Nette,
Dazzle me  with faceted polished gems  from your  jeweled coronet.  


I can’t conceive how,  here in this café with us having tea and sausages,
Your  flawless flights of fancy form  like  diamond-engraved images.   


From your rhyme royal fall pearls of moonlight’s beauty, and yet  you spoke  
Of hanging in cafes like this with painters and dancers and down-to-earth folk.


Your work is filled with honesty, sincerity, quicksilver wit, playfulness of spirit:
We can only wonder  at your  free siren soul that can shine and inspire it.


In you,  I recognize the majesty of the poetry I hope  to write.   My knee
Bends to the sovereign  quality   of the poet   I wish was me.    

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   *Written with great pleasure by   Sydney Peck  

    for Michael  J  Falotico's contest "First  Words Over Coffee"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/7/2011 10:31:00 AM
syd, thank you; much appreciated..;) huggs
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Date: 4/6/2011 3:26:00 PM
Nice reading your meeting the verse siren-queen nette, enjoyed it, Sydney
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:27:00 AM
Nette is indeed a mistress of imagery! Great description of her writing style and I love your dedication to her, Syd. Wishing you success in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2011 10:15:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today Sydney. I hope to get back soon to read more. The best to you in the contest and I am sure Nette will love this when she reads it. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 10:08:00 AM
Wow-What a wonderful tribute to Nette, Sydney :)-- she will totally love this one-- I bet this leaves her breathless ;)! Beautiful write for a talented poet, her way with words definitely sparkles :)
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