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Meet Me In the Silence

Meet Me in the Silence Bleeding call All my worlds fall Too much suffering Painful non-attending I’m a mess I’ve failed every test I couldn’t possibly please you There is nothing left to hold on to Amazing grace Retie every cut shoelace I keep tripping on myself I love too much the empty desired wealth God please save me Darkness is not the key Myself I hate I’m a messy love and you’re my mate Capture me Do it slowly Grasp every wound Don’t misunderstand me; my fate is not doomed Feel my infiltrated beating heart I’m in your arms don’t part Blow through the weak defending desires What I believe is true needs to be rewired From what I think I love but don’t love I need saving On top of me reality and imagination is caving God send it all away With you my heart wants to stay Meet me in the silence Let it be tense Stare into my eyes Shout the lyrics of my cries Let me fall onto you Let these tears be new May they not be sad This ongoing painful ride was the last one I had

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/10/2016 12:01:00 AM
Nicely thought and written. Loved it, Aidan.
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Date: 2/1/2016 8:28:00 AM
You are quite good, I very much enjoyed this piece. Great use of Rhyming. You might consider inserting triple or quad rhymes in different sections to give the piece a less structured feel.
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 2/1/2016 7:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for the support, the comment, and advise

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