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Medley of Questionkus

I fall backwards
grasping at the air
will anyone catch me

jumping forward
into empty pool
why didn't I look first

I am foolish
learning the hard way
will it make me wiser

floating through life
somewhat unaware
is my ignorance bliss

she smiles at me
my heart skips a beat
do we want the same thing

fantasy girl
woman of my dreams
is she within my reach

moving too fast
removing my clothes
do I want her to stop

let me ponder
the things I have done
can I forgive myself

yesterday was
today is what is
what will tomorrow be

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Verlena S. Walker Date: 5/7/2014 1:25:00 PM This is a favorite Rick... I like your Questionku with its reality... Verlena Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 5/7/2014 2:27:00 PM I will do that soon Rick... Verlena Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/7/2014 1:38:00 PM Thanks again Verlena, perhaps you will honour me by giving my form a try. I think you would do very well. Four syllables first line, five second and six on the third. The last line must be a question.

Monterey Sirak Date: 5/6/2014 6:04:00 AM I love the questions. Many of these I have asked myself repeatedly over the years. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/6/2014 7:47:00 AM Thanks again Monterey.

Cherl Dunn Date: 5/5/2014 9:05:00 PM Hello my friend enjoyed, a nicely done write, thank you also for your great comment on my swan believe it or not i did it in an a hour, it just flowed I love it when that happens don't you. thanks again for sharing your cool work and for reading mine take care cheri Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/6/2014 7:48:00 AM It was my pleasure, no thanks required.

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 5/5/2014 7:31:00 AM You've got your own form??!! Bloody hell mate, well done. Nice ending, I suppose the answer lies within. Delightful read. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/5/2014 8:57:00 AM Thanks Scott, I was pleased when it was accepted.

Eileen Manassian Date: 5/4/2014 12:16:00 PM Your own form! What a delight to have your form acknowledged! Your questions are so deep. Some seem to be taken from my own heart! That last one is a grand finale, Richard. Lovely...as always! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/4/2014 7:10:00 PM It's the answer to why the vase is broken. I pointed out the guilty party without saying he did it. On my way to your Blog. Eileen Manassian Date: 5/4/2014 3:37:00 PM OH!! And I have a new blog up! If you have a few minutes! ;) Eileen Manassian Date: 5/4/2014 3:36:00 PM Don't think me simple, but I didn't get that metaphor so well! Will you explain? Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/4/2014 3:31:00 PM My favorite for some reason is the slingshot one. So nice to have you comment Eileen. A big hug!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/2/2014 11:34:00 PM verrry interesting when I got to the slingshot part!! Clever suite of questionku, my friend. What inspired this? Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/3/2014 8:45:00 AM I havn't written one in a while so I thought I should not neglect my own form.