Richard Lamoureux Poet Questionku

Medley of Questionkus

I fall backwards
grasping at the air
will anyone catch me

jumping forward
into empty pool
why didn't I look first

I am foolish
learning the hard way
will it make me wiser

floating through life
somewhat unaware
is my ignorance bliss

she smiles at me
my heart skips a beat
do we want the same thing

fantasy girl
woman of my dreams
is she within my reach

moving too fast
removing my clothes
do I want her to stop

let me ponder
the things I have done
can I forgive myself

yesterday was
today is what is
what will tomorrow be

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Verlena S. Walker May 7, 2014 at 1:25 PM This is a favorite Rick... I like your Questionku with its reality... Verlena Verlena S. Walker May 7, 2014 at 2:27 PM I will do that soon Rick... Verlena Richard Lamoureux May 7, 2014 at 1:38 PM Thanks again Verlena, perhaps you will honour me by giving my form a try. I think you would do very well. Four syllables first line, five second and six on the third. The last line must be a question.

Monterey Sirak May 6, 2014 at 6:04 AM I love the questions. Many of these I have asked myself repeatedly over the years. Richard Lamoureux May 6, 2014 at 7:47 AM Thanks again Monterey.

Cherl Dunn May 5, 2014 at 9:05 PM Hello my friend enjoyed, a nicely done write, thank you also for your great comment on my swan believe it or not i did it in an a hour, it just flowed I love it when that happens don't you. thanks again for sharing your cool work and for reading mine take care cheri Richard Lamoureux May 6, 2014 at 7:48 AM It was my pleasure, no thanks required.

Scott Thirtyseven May 5, 2014 at 7:31 AM You've got your own form??!! Bloody hell mate, well done. Nice ending, I suppose the answer lies within. Delightful read. Richard Lamoureux May 5, 2014 at 8:57 AM Thanks Scott, I was pleased when it was accepted.

Eileen Manassian May 4, 2014 at 12:16 PM Your own form! What a delight to have your form acknowledged! Your questions are so deep. Some seem to be taken from my own heart! That last one is a grand finale, Richard. Lovely...as always! Richard Lamoureux May 4, 2014 at 7:10 PM It's the answer to why the vase is broken. I pointed out the guilty party without saying he did it. On my way to your Blog. Eileen Manassian May 4, 2014 at 3:37 PM OH!! And I have a new blog up! If you have a few minutes! ;) Eileen Manassian May 4, 2014 at 3:36 PM Don't think me simple, but I didn't get that metaphor so well! Will you explain? Richard Lamoureux May 4, 2014 at 3:31 PM My favorite for some reason is the slingshot one. So nice to have you comment Eileen. A big hug!

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2014 at 11:34 PM verrry interesting when I got to the slingshot part!! Clever suite of questionku, my friend. What inspired this? Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2014 at 8:45 AM I havn't written one in a while so I thought I should not neglect my own form.