Richard Lamoureux Poet Questionku

Medley of Ku

she wants to dance
quietly she waits
will anyone ask her

young man sees her
heart jumps in his chest
will he find his courage

so beautiful
she seems beyond reach
is her beauty a curse

up from his chair
walks across the room
will he find the right words

more boy than man
she sees him approach 
is he a good dancer

a nervous smile
twinkly blue eyes
is that love in his eyes

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Jan Allison October 17, 2015 at 7:56 PM what a charming string of Ku Richard - just checking out the correct form for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin October 17, 2015 at 2:19 AM Wow - I made it to your first page, but only because I have a secret mission. Anybody that went to a jr. high or high school dance can relate to this lovely poem. It captures that exact situation for me ... oh, young love ... CayCay Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2015 at 8:10 AM Thanks Cay Cay, I used to love those dances.

Arthur Vaso August 10, 2015 at 12:26 AM Two flew over the Ku Ku nest in love!!!! Loved this!

Bl Devnath August 7, 2015 at 1:03 PM Hi! my lovely friend you have penned a nice mystery of melody ku. Beauty is not curse for good one surely. Brilliantly done. 7 sure. Loved always,bl

Neva Romaine August 5, 2015 at 3:37 PM Hey Richard, stopped by for a visit and found this wonderful piece from you. I am unfamiliar with the form but I am so glad to get acquainted with it through this amazing poem! So beautiful in its expression. Be Blessed, Neva

Casarah Nance August 5, 2015 at 3:28 PM is that love...oh yeah baby, what a dance, :)

Nathan D. August 4, 2015 at 3:25 PM that's the cleverest way in showing off questionKU. Had no idea the form was real. I don't rate poems. But, this I will rate with a seven. NATE

Demetrios Trifiatis August 4, 2015 at 10:24 AM Skirmishes of feelings that love provides, dear Richard! Beautifully done!

Kp Nunez August 4, 2015 at 8:06 AM Lovely scene here, Rick! Brings back memories of youth! Those uncertainties... Many can relate to this...:-))) hugs! Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2015 at 8:17 AM Thanks Kim!;0)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2015 at 12:29 AM Yeah that is Richard! Lovely pen! Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2015 at 7:34 AM Thanks Upma. Hugs Richard.

Afolabi Muideen August 3, 2015 at 5:51 PM A very beautiful and sweet penned...lol!!!!................A.M. Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2015 at 7:35 AM Thanks A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2015 at 11:40 AM - So sweet and lovely poem, Richard ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2015 at 7:37 AM Hugs back to you Anne Lise.

Kim Merryman August 3, 2015 at 9:58 AM Richard, I enjoyed reading your medley of ku! An interesting way to tell a story! Love, Kim Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2015 at 7:37 AM Thanks Kim, much appreciated.

Eileen Manassian August 3, 2015 at 9:46 AM Lovely that you're writing in your own form. Blue eyes are dreamy....I'm sure she said yes! Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2015 at 7:39 AM It has been a while since I have written in my form. I'm pleased you like it.

Anu Nayak August 3, 2015 at 8:59 AM Beautiful poem dear Richard Lamoureux...love is in bud stage....several questions will deginitely flock in! Love, Anulaxmi:-) P.S: i did visit your website...read the welcome note..got to know about you and family:-) Stay blessed :-) Richard Lamoureux August 3, 2015 at 9:17 AM Thanks for checking out my site. Take care.