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Meditation On a Summer Evening

Meditation On a Summer Evening I see the Lovely Lily growing closer, The pool of air surrounding, Falling shallow. Evening breezes of breath become quiet. The nearer the advance of the Lovely Lily, The heavenly lights glow fiercely. Did You place fear in our hearts so We wouldn’t clutch at the gates of heaven too soon? That You might complete our puzzle piece? Take my hand. Lovely Lily, when You are ready, Take my hand.

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Date: 5/14/2017 4:38:00 AM
i really like this little poem which says so much...could be a double meaning, could be a person called lily, could be the flower...thank you for commenting on my work
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Date: 5/10/2017 10:20:00 PM
Very enchanting and beautiful write!
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Date: 5/10/2017 6:52:00 PM
Nice to meet you Sunlite Wanter You have written a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this poem.I felt peaceful after reading this poem.
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Date: 5/10/2017 5:51:00 PM
Beautiful and mesmerizing my friend. A soft and enticing feeling flows from your words. Very nicely written.
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