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Mediocrity Monstrosity

A glint in the black, like stars
    Pearly, polished, pointy peaks of a fiend
      Fangs of self-deprecation, puncturing every effort
    Coursing the flow of doubt, discouragement and defeat
I may not see your face, beast, but your teeth betray you in darkness

Dripping with the blood of my best effort and intention
    Inexperience and ignorance, clotting ...
      I am but a babe in the woods of poetic expression
    Searching like Hansel, for crumbs of excuse and artistic insight
Oh, I see your vestiges, hear the gnawing of your dismal disregard

And your umbra shades every scribble ... every keystroke
    But I know you well ... I know who placed you there
      Yet, with a sword forged in kind encouragement and friendships, rare
    I will stand on the battlements, and fight to the end
And should you gain the last word, it shall be inscribed ... in my blood.





~ 8th Place ~  in the "Plucking the Poisonous Parrot" Poetry Contest, Maureen McGreavy, Judge & Sponsor.
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 9:16 PM
Poe~Potent! Lovely done Greg! Congrtulations for your win and thank you <3 xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Wow that is one scary beast, Gregory. Shine up your suit of armor and go get him!
Lawless Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:33 PM
Damn....that's one helluva parrot.
Barden Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 12:02 AM
Thank you, John! Blessings, my friend!
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Gnawing of your dismal disregard, love it!! Masterful poe-esque write!
Barden Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Thank you so very much, John, I am honored that you found this worthy, as it is one I'm very proud of, and far outside the "ordinary", I believe. Blessings! :-)
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