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A glint in the black, like stars Pearly, polished, pointy peaks of a fiend Fangs of self-deprecation, puncturing every effort Coursing the flow of doubt, discouragement and defeat I may not see your face, beast, but your teeth betray you in darkness Dripping with the blood of my best effort and intention Inexperience and ignorance, clotting ... I am but a babe in the woods of poetic expression Searching like Hansel, for crumbs of excuse and artistic insight Oh, I see your vestiges, hear the gnawing of your dismal disregard And your umbra shades every scribble ... every keystroke But I know you well ... I know who placed you there Yet, with a sword forged in kind encouragement and friendships, rare I will stand on the battlements, and fight to the end And should you gain the last word, it shall be inscribed ... in my blood. ~ 8th Place ~ in the "Plucking the Poisonous Parrot" Poetry Contest, Maureen McGreavy, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/28/2019 9:16:00 PM
Poe~Potent! Lovely done Greg! Congrtulations for your win and thank you <3 xomo!
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:15:00 PM
Wow that is one scary beast, Gregory. Shine up your suit of armor and go get him!
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:33:00 PM
Damn....that's one helluva parrot.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/28/2019 12:02:00 AM
Thank you, John! Blessings, my friend!
Date: 1/26/2019 10:53:00 AM
Gnawing of your dismal disregard, love it!! Masterful poe-esque write!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/27/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thank you so very much, John, I am honored that you found this worthy, as it is one I'm very proud of, and far outside the "ordinary", I believe. Blessings! :-)

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