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Mechanic Needed

Hey ! I want To borrow Your motor bike I'll let you have all the bits back later.
Written 22nd September 2019 Picture number 4. For make it five poetry contest Sponsored by Joseph May.
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Romios Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 11:03 AM
Oh, Tom..brings back memories of my days with aFiat 600 long, long ago, Sorry I missed your wim, Just mexx Belated Kudos
Cunningham Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 1:50 PM
Thanks Panagiota, no apology needed. Regards. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 6:58 PM
aha, you scored very well I see. BIG congrats, Tom
Cunningham Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Thank you Andrea, he liked the jumbo sized humour lol. Tom
Callus Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 3:29 AM
You trumpeted your humour with resounding results, Tom :) Congratulations on your high-flying win. Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 4:37 AM
Thanks very much Paul, took a chance on the humour and wasn't sure it would place. Greetings from Turkey. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:41 AM
- Congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Thanks Anne, still here, just got back from a holiday in a holiday for a few days. Tom.
Chiri Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:45 PM
Lol Tom great piece! Congrats on your win!;)
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:53 AM
Thanks Brenda, glad you enjoyed the humour. Greetings from Turkey. Hope you're well. Tom
May Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:26 PM
All the pieces will be in his trunk!, Congrats on your win Tom..
Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:03 PM
Haha love it Joseph, thanks for my placement,also for hosting the contest. Tom
Mcguire Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Funny! Sad but true!
Cunningham Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Hope them two got away ok.
Adams Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 8:59 PM
lol, this was good...i went with number one, first one i have seen for this one, pretty clever Tom :) hugs
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 11:35 PM
Thanks Sandra, must admit its the first one I've seen too, noticed you changed yours too, Tom
Roper Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 8:55 PM
this is very good, Tom, good luck in the contest. Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 11:32 PM
Thanks very much Eve, hope Joseph enjoys the humour, it made me smile. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 4:48 PM
I loved this Tom! A delightful poem to go with this picture. One guy has a smile on his face. You can never predict what animal will do! Well done! : ) xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 11:30 PM
Thanks Connie, happy you liked it. Yes I saw that one man with the smile, nerves maybe. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 3:55 PM
very very clever, Tom. This was a difficult picture for me to think anything up!!
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 4:12 PM
Thanks Andrea, not sure if Joseph was looking for humour or not, anyway took a chance. Tom
Ball Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 10:28 AM
The picture makes it . This is great. It really made me smile. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 10:35 AM
Thanks Judy, when I saw the picture I couldn't think of anything else. Tom
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September 22, 2019 at 9:54 AM
Ha ha, I too would be running.
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 10:23 AM
Me too Richard, don't think there was much left of the bike lol.
Mcgee Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Funny! I want to trade for a ride...gl in the contest with this great interpretation.
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Thanks very much Jeanne, I saw a vid of a bull elephant thrashing a car and it was completely flattened when he'd finished. Tom
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 7:52 AM
A fun read, Tom..very clever interpretation of that photo..so well written!
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Thanks very much Vijay,magnificent beasts though, saw them close up in Kenya, they were red from the dust in Zsavo national park. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 7:16 AM
- He has to borrow a helmet too - Careful with the head ... :))) - Hope there is air in the wheels ... Mechanic really needed ... love your suggestion, Tom :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Thanks Anne, you don't argue with a beast that size, mechanic would have his work cut out for sure. Tom
One Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 6:12 AM
Haha... A very dangerous situation!
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 9:57 AM
Thanks SO, a bit too close for comfort. Tom
Sands Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 6:11 AM
Lol! Great one Tom :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Heidi, wouldn't argue with the elephant, he could have it, I'd even buy the petrol lol. Tom
Mcintosh Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 3:02 AM
LOL... That's a good one. I wouldn't have been able to think of a thing for this pic. Blessings to you
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 3:04 AM
Thanks Regina, was feeling humourous this morning and came up with that. Tom.
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 2:56 AM
ha ha ha love it Tom:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 3:03 AM
Thanks Jan, couldn't resist, not sure if Joseph was after humour. Tom
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