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Meat Market Robbery

Bacon Taken By Andrea Dietrich for the Laconic Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/12/2015 9:20:00 PM
Now that is so cool. Thanks for the giggle love Shanexx
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Date: 10/10/2014 1:04:00 PM
I suspect the butler. I love a good mystery.
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Date: 12/2/2013 6:54:00 PM
Short and salty! A very unique terse verse, Andrea! Good work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem!
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Date: 12/1/2013 5:06:00 PM
haha can't get much more terse verse than this! congrats :)
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:23:00 AM
Nice job Andrea, Congrats on your win. I hope that I can win on two words some day. By the way I think I'm the one that took the bacon.....Roger
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Date: 11/29/2013 5:27:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Andrea
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:53:00 PM
Cute Andrea...I am still stuck on your "Grab it, rabbit" Pick pocket bunny footle. The baby loves it too. Haha!
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Date: 10/19/2012 7:21:00 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Andrea. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/15/2012 12:54:00 AM
A former co-worker of mine often said "Ain't nothin' shakin' but the bacon, and that's taken." If I robbed a meat market, I would not waste my effort stealing bacon. I would go for all the filet mignons and tenderloins they have in the place.
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Date: 10/14/2012 1:05:00 PM
Just returning "two this one" Andrea; L O L.." Say I'll bet you play a mean game of "backgammon" 'Just coulden't help that one girl.." SMOKIN.....)
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Date: 10/13/2012 11:46:00 PM
Oooooh Andrea! ...Well, I've never seen two words with so much meaning as these!
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Date: 10/13/2012 12:32:00 PM
Well we all mistake things at one time or another so don't sweat the small stuff ha ha. love phyl
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Date: 10/11/2012 4:54:00 PM
You're forsaken -Hi Andrea, I read somewhere your hubby hogs the puter and you are wildly busy. Makes one feel frantic when it goes on too long. Love your succinct statement here!
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Date: 10/10/2012 3:43:00 PM
Ham scam, burger lary, cereal killer, five butterfinger discount. They've broadened out to a grocery store.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/10/2012 3:47:00 PM
hehehe
Date: 10/10/2012 11:34:00 AM
Awesome! Apparently I misunderstood it too and had to go unenter my poem! Back to the drawing board...
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Date: 10/10/2012 10:55:00 AM
Did like this one (straight of the hoof ) Andrea I shall have to study footles more..' Hope you sre well Joe..)
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Date: 10/10/2012 7:21:00 AM
Here you go again with the Footles!...You are the master!...I know you like movies...just posted a blog you might wanna' check out - Tim
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Date: 10/9/2012 12:49:00 PM
It was me. Am adding tomato, bread and lettuce. Jiggers, the cops! Love, daver
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Date: 10/7/2012 4:09:00 PM
well i still like this, andrea,
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Date: 10/7/2012 1:02:00 PM
LOL, just love this one, Andrea : )
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Date: 10/7/2012 11:07:00 AM
ops.... i should also say thank you so much for your very inspiring comments in my first tanka poem. Good luck and best wishes for you big wins my dear friend!!!! hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:42:00 AM
Yeah, I'm not following what she meant either, but from what I gathered she wanted Two, Too, or To theme to be in the poem...but also two lines, but don't listen to me, I don't know for sure myself! But this is a great footle by the way my friend! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:21:00 AM
yeah good one Andrea...enjoyed. Hope you're having a lovely Sunday.
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Date: 10/7/2012 8:34:00 AM
Shaken, awaken, Andrea, but love it!! Jag
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Date: 10/7/2012 8:20:00 AM
Love your footle. I miss Brian. I think Deb does want specific forms of two lines, and also one of those words. Still, I don't read many good footles.
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