Meat Market Robbery

Bacon Taken
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cooper Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Now that is so cool. Thanks for the giggle love Shanexx
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 1:04 PM
I suspect the butler. I love a good mystery.
Deschler Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Short and salty! A very unique terse verse, Andrea! Good work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem!
Puddifoot Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 5:06 PM
haha can't get much more terse verse than this! congrats :)
Horsch Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 10:23 AM
Nice job Andrea, Congrats on your win. I hope that I can win on two words some day. By the way I think I'm the one that took the bacon.....Roger
Mehta Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 5:27 AM
Congrats on the win, Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Cute Andrea...I am still stuck on your "Grab it, rabbit" Pick pocket bunny footle. The baby loves it too. Haha!
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 7:21 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Andrea. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
Pettit Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 12:54 AM
A former co-worker of mine often said "Ain't nothin' shakin' but the bacon, and that's taken." If I robbed a meat market, I would not waste my effort stealing bacon. I would go for all the filet mignons and tenderloins they have in the place.
Maverick Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Just returning "two this one" Andrea; L O L.." Say I'll bet you play a mean game of "backgammon" 'Just coulden't help that one girl.." SMOKIN.....)
Tsiluma Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 11:46 PM
Oooooh Andrea! ...Well, I've never seen two words with so much meaning as these!
Babcock Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 12:32 PM
Well we all mistake things at one time or another so don't sweat the small stuff ha ha. love phyl
Wesley Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 4:54 PM
You're forsaken -Hi Andrea, I read somewhere your hubby hogs the puter and you are wildly busy. Makes one feel frantic when it goes on too long. Love your succinct statement here!
Johnson Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Ham scam, burger lary, cereal killer, five butterfinger discount. They've broadened out to a grocery store.
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:47 PM
hehehe
Susan Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Awesome! Apparently I misunderstood it too and had to go unenter my poem! Back to the drawing board...
Maverick Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 10:55 AM
Did like this one (straight of the hoof ) Andrea I shall have to study footles more..' Hope you sre well Joe..)
Ryerson Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 7:21 AM
Here you go again with the Footles!...You are the master!...I know you like movies...just posted a blog you might wanna' check out - Tim
Austin Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 12:49 PM
It was me. Am adding tomato, bread and lettuce. Jiggers, the cops! Love, daver
Horsman Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 4:09 PM
well i still like this, andrea,
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:02 PM
LOL, just love this one, Andrea : )
Gasun Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 11:07 AM
ops.... i should also say thank you so much for your very inspiring comments in my first tanka poem. Good luck and best wishes for you big wins my dear friend!!!! hugs:)LG
Sivey Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Yeah, I'm not following what she meant either, but from what I gathered she wanted Two, Too, or To theme to be in the poem...but also two lines, but don't listen to me, I don't know for sure myself! But this is a great footle by the way my friend! Awesome Work!!
Rozario Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 10:21 AM
yeah good one Andrea...enjoyed. Hope you're having a lovely Sunday.
Nair Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 8:34 AM
Shaken, awaken, Andrea, but love it!! Jag
Grisetti Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Love your footle. I miss Brian. I think Deb does want specific forms of two lines, and also one of those words. Still, I don't read many good footles.
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