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Meant To Be

~ Softly I surrender to the whisper of your lips, the longing sighs asking if our love is meant to be Melting before the alluring beauty embracing my eyes while delicate fingers trace my desires… I answer breathless, Yes, my darling, I truly believe our love is meant to be Taking your silken hand gently in mine, the warmth comforts as does the smile blooming on your face... you rest your head upon my shoulder and I know you know I mean it I too smile as lingering affection gathers within my heart amidst a waking dawn of sunrise devotion as night turns to day and I cherish this moment lost within your arms, falling helplessly beyond pastel horizons of a shimmering forever meant only for us ~ 11/29/19 For the: Love me like you mean it Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 1/20/2020 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Chris :)
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Date: 1/20/2020 12:35:00 PM
i knew you would be a top winner with a love poem...i adored this one the first time, even more beautiful the second time... shining where it belongs... congratulations Chris...i am honored to once again share the podium with you... hugs
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Date: 1/20/2020 12:08:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Chris. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/9/2019 3:11:00 PM
Wow Chris amazing as always! Beautiful!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Brenda.
Date: 12/2/2019 10:15:00 AM
Pastel horizons of a shimmering forever...uh ok(reader is stunned lost for words.. very disconcerting really) Now what am I gonna do with this beauty? Another fave!! you are on a roll Chris! No need for luck in the contest this IS the winner!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2019 10:42:00 AM
Thanks John. The contest title kind of threw me a bit but I did what I thought needed be done. I appreciate your kind thoughts always.
Date: 12/1/2019 9:47:00 PM
Breathtaking, Chris ~ a picture perfect moment! Good luck, my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2019 8:22:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Your kindness is a gift to me. I appreciate you HT
Date: 12/1/2019 1:05:00 PM
Hi Chris - a touching, loving, caring, romantic and softly sensuous appeal - I enjoyed the excitement that you picked up in tempo of this poem Chris and the inevitability of your everlasting love. Well penned Chris and best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2019 8:22:00 AM
Thank you again Jennifer for all of the kindness you show me. I am happy you liked this one so much.
Date: 11/29/2019 4:13:00 PM
~~~sigh~~~ such romantic words, Chris, you never fail to wow the ladies, do you. well done.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 4:24:00 PM
You can't blame a guy for trying. : ) Thank you so very much Becca. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 11/29/2019 12:46:00 PM
And she clearly knows it. So nice...waking dawn of sunrise devotion. That is exactly what this is. Well written Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
Thank you again and again my dear friend. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this one. I did have a hard time with it but it will have to stay as is.
Date: 11/29/2019 10:37:00 AM
your love for words, a feeling of excitement in romance are so caring and loving ..Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/29/2019 10:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/29/2019 9:04:00 AM
gorgeous write Chris...i knew you would be able to pen something beautiful for this contest theme...i tried, sent two to myself, posted one, deleted it off here, but i just can't get it where i want it...yours is absolutely perfect in every way... Good Morning my friend :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. I struggled with this, believe it or not and I am still not sure I am completely happy with it. The contest title kind of through me a bit but I am happy you liked this one so much. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 11/29/2019 8:44:00 AM
falling helplessly beyond pastel horizons of a shimmering forever...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 9:05:00 AM
Thanks my friend. That's what meaningful love should feel like.

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