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Meaningless Rhymes-5

Stumbling through existence having passive days and active nights your happiness a facade contemplate promises were made wonder are they kept safe but past is a cloud of haze don't look any further don't turn your face it was dawn when i met u it'll be dusk when we call it a day.

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Date: 5/12/2022 11:53:00 PM
I'm reminded of David Bowie's method of writing some of his songs: he wrote down sentences on paper then tore each sentence from the paper and mixed them up to form a song. I really enjoyed reading this. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 5/15/2022 10:12:00 PM
Appreciate it Gary.
Date: 4/9/2022 8:59:00 AM
As with anything, meaning is in the mind of the beholder. Enjoyed this. xomo
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Date: 5/15/2022 10:14:00 PM
Thank you Maureen .

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