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Meandering

Meandering stream of dreams, That flows beside the old willow~ Where laughters of my childhood echo Upon the river rocks of blue and yellow. I throw a stone upon her bosom~ To see at least a tiny ripple, Instead I see lilies blossom, In the meandering stream of dreams. September 9, 2021 For “M” Contest, New Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France ‘Your choice’ Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/11/2023 7:05:00 AM
Back with "Congratulation" on your win. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 1/31/2022 6:24:00 PM
'Lilies blossoming in the meandering streams of dreams'.... It carves such beautiful images. A very soothing feel this poem gives like the gently flowing streams without even a ripple.
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Date: 10/21/2021 9:40:00 AM
Your "Meandering" is a beautiful story/write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away.................
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Date: 9/24/2021 11:18:00 AM
A mystical dream of metaphoric flowers blooming where ripples should be. A beautiful dreamy picture. Congratulations for your win with poem of many layers! Blessings my friend.
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Date: 9/22/2021 2:42:00 PM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this wonderful poem, splendid writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/19/2021 10:59:00 AM
wow, I love the way you did meandering in this succinct and fascinating way. Very very nice (mine was so long!!) Also Congrats on the win!
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Date: 9/18/2021 10:34:00 AM
very very soft and soothing - excellent image, My Friend - "meandering streams of dreams" - simply stunning! Love ~ Mala
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