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Life, a meandering river ~ Not all pebbles are shiny! the humming sonata of a melodious stream tranquil dreams...until the current becomes fast, and the journey becomes arduous! Life ~ full of possibilities, dreams infinite... affection, romantic love, close relationships - peace ~ our goal painful memories - loss, longing, death, heartbreak... every day a challenge! An incense burns to exude aroma until only the ash remains... A candle glows, and melts leaving tiny pearls... Flowers droop and lose their lustre, Rivers flow with curves and bends, from high mountaintops through plains and valleys, to reach ultimate love. Dreams don’t wilt.... But Happiness fades away before we know it! FIRST PLACE September 17, 2021 For "M" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/22/2021 2:33:00 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing, nice image ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Love your line, "Dreams don’t wilt.... But Happiness fades away before we know it!" So very true. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 9/20/2021 12:48:00 AM
Beautiful reflection on life. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/18/2021 9:33:00 AM
Very soothing!! Happiness fades away before we know it..so let’s savour every moment and let not happiness slip.This poem flow softly as a meandering river. Great write!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/18/2021 10:30:00 AM
Thanks, JCB. Life, always seems to me, like a meandering river - it flows, but the journey is not always calm and soothing.
Date: 9/18/2021 12:14:00 AM
This is a beautiful nature poem and a metaphor. Like Tennyson’s Brook. tranquil peaceful. all the best in the contest.
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Date: 9/18/2021 10:27:00 AM
Thanks, Krish. Love Tennyson's poem you have mentioned.

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