Notes About The Poem

Meandering

Life, a meandering river ~
                                     Not all pebbles are shiny! 
                          the humming sonata of a melodious stream
                       tranquil dreams...until the current becomes fast, 
                                and the journey becomes arduous!
              

                               Life ~ full of possibilities, dreams infinite...
                           affection, romantic love, close relationships - 
                                              peace ~ our goal
               
                                          painful memories -
                               loss, longing, death, heartbreak...
                                        every day a challenge!
             
                                    
                 An incense burns to exude aroma until only the ash remains...
                              A candle glows, and melts leaving tiny pearls...
                              Flowers droop and lose their lustre, 
                              Rivers flow with curves and bends, 
                   from high mountaintops through plains and valleys,
                                       to reach ultimate love. 
                                      

                                            Dreams don’t wilt....
                       But Happiness fades away before we know it! 


                                                FIRST PLACE
                                           September 17, 2021
                                         For "M" Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing, nice image ~ love and serenity _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Love your line, "Dreams don’t wilt.... But Happiness fades away before we know it!" So very true. Have a blessed day.................
Alex Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 12:48 AM
Beautiful reflection on life. Congratulations!
Brul Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Very soothing!! Happiness fades away before we know it..so let’s savour every moment and let not happiness slip.This poem flow softly as a meandering river. Great write!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Thanks, JCB. Life, always seems to me, like a meandering river - it flows, but the journey is not always calm and soothing.
Radhakrishna Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 12:14 AM
This is a beautiful nature poem and a metaphor. Like Tennyson’s Brook. tranquil peaceful. all the best in the contest.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Thanks, Krish. Love Tennyson's poem you have mentioned.
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