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Meal Time

Listen up! now that's enough, we've been here before, you know this I'm sure eat up quick, it won't make you sick; your Dad'll be here soon so move up,and make room

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/7/2011 7:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/5/2011 9:25:00 AM
Brian, loved reading Meal time. Congrats on your win in the contest. Glenna
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed reading your poem!!!!!--LORI
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:33:00 PM
Out of the ordinary for Brian, looks good on you. Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:05:00 PM
Congrats Brian on a stellar win with this stunning entry my friend... prolific words..luv..
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:58:00 PM
fabulous, brina..cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:58:00 PM
*brian*
Date: 5/18/2011 3:30:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this. Very nice
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Date: 5/5/2011 8:58:00 PM
Nice to see you back at the soup. I have not been on very much lately as it seems life is busy at the moment. Enjoyed reading your poem this evening. love phyl
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:30:00 PM
Delightful scenerio!! enjoyed this very much!
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Date: 5/5/2011 4:20:00 PM
LOL Quite an interesting verse, Brian. A super entry for Francine's contest. I need to send you a Soup mail. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 3:36:00 PM
... enjoy Your style ... simple and seamless... thanx for paying attention on my work... Dino
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:13:00 AM
What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning Brian. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:24:00 PM
Brian, smiles is this about a hand gesture... maybe feeding... well someone seems to be difiance... enjoyed your poem.. God Bless,..p.d.
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