Meal Time

Listen up!
now that's enough,
we've been here before,
you know this I'm sure

eat up quick,
it won't make you sick;
your Dad'll be here soon
so move up,and make room
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 7:18 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Poetess Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 9:25 AM
Brian, loved reading Meal time. Congrats on your win in the contest. Glenna
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August 4, 2011 at 10:22 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed reading your poem!!!!!--LORI
Freeman Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Out of the ordinary for Brian, looks good on you. Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Brian. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Congrats Brian on a stellar win with this stunning entry my friend... prolific words..luv..
Onclaud Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:58 PM
fabulous, brina..cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
Onclaud Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:58 PM
*brian*
Clark Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 3:30 AM
Enjoyed reading this. Very nice
Babcock Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 8:58 PM
Nice to see you back at the soup. I have not been on very much lately as it seems life is busy at the moment. Enjoyed reading your poem this evening. love phyl
Richards Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Delightful scenerio!! enjoyed this very much!
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May 5, 2011 at 4:20 PM
LOL Quite an interesting verse, Brian. A super entry for Francine's contest. I need to send you a Soup mail. Love, Carolyn
Spahillari Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 3:36 PM
... enjoy Your style ... simple and seamless... thanx for paying attention on my work... Dino
Brown Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 7:13 AM
What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning Brian. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol
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May 4, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Brian, smiles is this about a hand gesture... maybe feeding... well someone seems to be difiance... enjoyed your poem.. God Bless,..p.d.
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