Meadowlarks

meadowlarks

meadowlarks return
 new songs fill the meadows...
  forests swing and sway

3/14/22
Contest Bird Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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Delaney Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Love this little dance with nature, Sam: We all rejoice in spring. SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 4:29 PM
so lovely. They make those trees start dancing!!
Kauffman Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Thank you Andrea! I loved thinking about all of nature in sync to the music of the meadowlark.
Baker Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 3:54 PM
Nice entry, Sam. I like adding the breeze to the end of your Haiku. Bill
Kauffman Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Hi Bill! Thank you so much. I thought it would be fun to picture the forest dancing swaying to the meadowlark song. Have been enjoying writing haiku - action packed little verses. Blessings!
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 3:54 PM
Splendid images in every line, Sam. Much revelry of spring and awesome ending line.
Kauffman Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thank you so much Vijay. Had fun picturing the meadowlark's influence on nature. And, you are so right. There is a revelry about spring that gets the toes tapping and the feet dancing! All the best. Blessings.
Kingston Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:27 PM
Dear Sam, this is a pretty one. We love birds in my family and my husband and I take am bird walks to hear "new songs filing the meadows" Such a lovely welcomed sound, such a lovely welcoming poem.
Kauffman Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 9:35 AM
Hi Marikate! Always wonderful to hear from you. Thank you! The meadow lark song is so beautiful, so distinctive, so happy. Just now have discovered we have meadow larks. We too enjoy watching all of the birds and listening to their songs. We seem to be on the migratory flight path of many birds so we have a lovely variety of songs and colors to revel in each year - the birdfeeder helps! Blessings. All the best.
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 4:10 PM
absolutely delightful Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 4:15 PM
Oh Jan, thank you so much! Until recently I didn't know we had Meadow Larks. What a delightful joy their song is now that I know what to listen for any time of day! Thank you for sharing in that delight! Hugs!
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 4:02 PM
Hello Sam, this sis a wonderful oem you creat3ed. Hugs. I enjoy to listen to the birds sing in the early morn.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Hello Sam, it is delightful to listen to the Dove's song in the early morn. Hugs.
Kauffman Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 4:13 PM
Hi Darlene! Thank you! I'm with you about listening to the songs of the morning birds especially the doves. Many blessings!
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