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Me Without You

Me without you is a motionless sail boat, A kid being out doors in the winter without a coat. A basketball star without ever having any coach. Can you picture trying to fly a plane with no engine? A mother of three trying to feed her children with no kitchen? Do you notice some of the things that are missing? Baby you are a puzzle, with a piece missing. Without the E in ME, is everything! Nothing is complete if there is no YOU AND ME. That is like trying to serve a turkey with no wings on Thanksgivings. I am the key you turn in your ignition, I kindle your love intentions. Oh, what sweet reminiscing, like a pastry treats with frosting. I bet that put a smile on your face, like a kid winning his first race. As I were your Hostess Twinkie and you were my creamed that filled me. You are the only one that completes me, that how our love flow so swiftly. As a little girl twirling around in her favorite dress, I think I will keep you because you fit me best. There is no such thing as a Me without you, because simply no one could ever compare to you. That is like a sneaker with no lace, you are surly to fall on your face. But don’t worry I will be right there to catch you with grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/10/2013 11:24:00 AM
An awesome piece..love the flow in all of your work!!
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 6/10/2013 12:02:00 PM
aww thank you Pace. :)
Date: 1/1/2013 2:25:00 PM
Twanna , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 1/1/2013 2:40:00 PM
Aww thank you for taking time out of your day and think of me. I truly feel honored...may you have da best year ever :)

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