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ME TOO So what’s all the to-do with “me too” So we join the many instead of the few It all seems another act of distract Play popularity’s game of trivial fact One of those “me toos” living under a pinned shoe One of those “me toos” Still can’t see “the forest through the trees” The same game continues to be played Of “hide and seek” You just choose the game and roll the dice Anyway you cut it up, you take a slice One of the “me toos” Looking to distract Instead reach out with love Open your eyes and ears Have courage to lose Your life, job, career Because until that happens… I don’t care to join in the sea That sleeps with nightmares Only when someone’s exposed Then it’s safe to depose And let everyone know How “brave you are” The courageous are often slammed Patted on the head “Oh, he’s just like that dear. Be a good girl. You’ll become a star” How many sell their soul Let the devil do it over and over Again Steamed and pressed You’re ready for the press “Smile, like a good girl You’re a star” Not far to jump To take your clothes Off for the next starring role And see the next young thing Crying behind closed doors As you say “Smile. Be a good girl… Yes, me too” Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Date: 11/13/2017 3:44:00 AM
I maybe could understand how you may fee but don't be fooled and dammed. Remember the heaven Father will not forgive you if you do not forgive others. Also, yes pride goes before a fall. Remember Jesus suffered all the most, yet He said, forgive them Father. Should we not try to put others first, before ourselves. Believing God to heal all and do all. He will take care of the rest. Me too. www.jesuschristvisitation.net
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 11/14/2017 10:16:00 AM
Also, note the Spirits whether they be of Christ or not of Christ, scripture says.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 11/13/2017 12:41:00 PM
Hi Kim, I know about the Me too message. Just making sure. Yes, there shouldn't be a distraction. Note; In the Garden of Eden, Satan used both good and bad, which of course is all Bad; as far as the Lord is concern. Everything we do and should noted in Jesus the ultimate truth! As Jesus told His disciples, "Do you believe that the people who died from the fall of the tower wear greater sinners. No, I tell you, But unless you repent, you too will all likewise perish. So, we should be lifting up Jesus first as He said, and He will draw all men and women unto Himself. This is the only true and final cause that will resolve, renew and recreate everything right as He said, He is able. www.jesuschristvisitation.net
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 7:40:00 AM
Ronald, what are you reading into this poem? This was written about the message of “me too” that was being sent in facebook messages. What I was saying here is it is not about relating to all of these people. Note the 3rd line, “It all seems another act of distract” What is your first line relating to? It is about standing up for what is right, not just being a victim
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Date: 11/13/2017 4:04:00 AM
Note: Also, not to forgive is Satan's scheme and plan.
Date: 10/20/2017 5:44:00 AM
- Kim, congratulations on your p.o.t.d., very well written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2017 5:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!
Date: 10/20/2017 2:27:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Kim, so well deserved...Maria
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2017 5:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Maria!
Date: 10/19/2017 8:19:00 PM
Late Congrats!!! Kim...on POTD!!!...a message that must be read...great work my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2017 5:51:00 AM
Thank you, WW!
Date: 10/19/2017 6:35:00 PM
wow, interesting write,Kim, how many of these little starlets do they take advantage.Congratulations on the nicely written write Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2017 5:51:00 AM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 10/19/2017 9:54:00 AM
Excellent choice for POTD..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Silent!
Date: 10/19/2017 8:19:00 AM
Hi Kim, This is a good poem with a great message. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 12:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis!
Date: 10/19/2017 7:46:00 AM
Kim, well written; congrats on the POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 10/19/2017 7:39:00 AM
your poem is a briillant and well compose one thank u that......most specially this wordings The courageous are often slammed Patted on the head “Oh, he’s just like that dear. Be a good girl. You’ll become a star”
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Aniemeka!
Date: 10/19/2017 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Kim!! Very well-done. The theme of this free verse is very interesting. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, Gary! :)
Date: 10/19/2017 6:42:00 AM
Back with congratulations Kim :) hugs! mo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen! xo
Date: 10/19/2017 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations Kim...Very insightful poem...Deserving POTD any day...All the best to you...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 6:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Arturo! <3 xx
Date: 10/17/2017 1:15:00 PM
To loosely paraphrase a country song: Man, you write like a Wonder Woman, Kim. This poem rocks. And you don't baby cradle the truth. I LOVE truth TKO's. Keep knocking the liars down, keep knocking the foul-mouthed oddballs outta of the park. Love your style ... you got sass and brass. You got style and class. My kinda poetess. Soul gripping poetry. Stellar write. Love and joy always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2017 1:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, Freddie! <3
Date: 10/17/2017 12:51:00 PM
Kudos for highlighting such an important topic--well written, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 10/17/2017 12:17:00 PM
This packs a punch! Auto correct in my typing fury wrote "ethics" packs a punch :) awesome and love and hugs xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen! So tired of the gang! No one wants to “see” but they always love to distract. <3 Much love, Kim

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