Me Myself and I

Me myself and I
were talking to myselve's
when we asked us a question
and they were not themselves.

They themselves and them
now questioning themselves
said we were not like them
and had to be yourselves.

You yourselve's and you
now separate from myselve's
meant you could not be me
and we could be ourselves.

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Date: 10/20/2017 5:35:00 AM
- Trevor, congratulations on your great p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/22/2017 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise. Pleasure to have you stop by. Trevor
Date: 10/19/2017 9:55:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Trevor, a well written piece..
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Date: 10/19/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Silent One. POTD is a great idea for the site. Trevor
Date: 10/17/2017 8:33:00 PM
Congrats on POTD on this intriguing write of yours Trevor....Maria
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Date: 10/18/2017 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Maria. I was surprised myself and I. LOL Trevor
Date: 10/17/2017 11:21:00 AM
You did it. We've tried it. First to second to third and third to first, purely circular. When we tried it I kept going in circles chasing their tail.
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 10/18/2017 1:23:00 PM
Sounds like cause and effect. LOL nice wordplay Michael. It's inspires. Trevor
Date: 10/17/2017 8:28:00 AM
very clever word play Trevor congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/18/2017 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Jan yourself and you. LOL Trevor
Date: 10/17/2017 7:15:00 AM
Perhaps the best "selfie" (if not the only one) written for the soup.....love the word play and humor herein....
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Date: 10/18/2017 1:31:00 PM
LOL Thanks John. I never considered that. LOL
Date: 10/17/2017 7:09:00 AM
Fun stuff Trevor, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 10/18/2017 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Charlie. Appreciate that. Trevor
Date: 10/17/2017 6:52:00 AM
I'm not a psychiatrist but this sounds like a case of Dissociative Identity Disorder. Clever poem Trevor, congrats on the POTD!
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Date: 10/18/2017 2:23:00 PM
LOL Only a sequel will tell. LOL Thanks John. Trevor
Date: 10/15/2017 3:35:00 PM
Tee hee love it, fave :) xomo!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/17/2017 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on potd you guys! ;)
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 10/16/2017 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Maureen; from me myself and I. Trevor
Date: 10/15/2017 2:31:00 PM
Hello Trevor nice to meet you. This poem is clever. Like it. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/16/2017 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Darlene. I appreciate the comment. Trevor
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