Trevor Mcleod Poet Quatrain

Me Myself and I

Me myself and I
were talking to myselve's
when we asked us a question
and they were not themselves.

They themselves and them
now questioning themselves
said we were not like them
and had to be yourselves.

You yourselve's and you
now separate from myselve's
meant you could not be me
and we could be ourselves.

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Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2017 at 5:35 AM - Trevor, congratulations on your great p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Trevor Mcleod October 22, 2017 at 12:53 PM Thanks Anne-Lise. Pleasure to have you stop by. Trevor

Silent One October 19, 2017 at 9:55 AM Congrats on POTD Trevor, a well written piece.. Trevor Mcleod October 19, 2017 at 12:33 PM Thanks Silent One. POTD is a great idea for the site. Trevor

Maria Williams October 17, 2017 at 8:33 PM Congrats on POTD on this intriguing write of yours Trevor....Maria Trevor Mcleod October 18, 2017 at 1:20 PM Thanks Maria. I was surprised myself and I. LOL Trevor

Michael Vacek October 17, 2017 at 11:21 AM You did it. We've tried it. First to second to third and third to first, purely circular. When we tried it I kept going in circles chasing their tail. Trevor Mcleod October 18, 2017 at 1:23 PM Sounds like cause and effect. LOL nice wordplay Michael. It's inspires. Trevor

Jan Allison October 17, 2017 at 8:28 AM very clever word play Trevor congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx Trevor Mcleod October 18, 2017 at 2:22 PM Thanks Jan yourself and you. LOL Trevor

John Lawless October 17, 2017 at 7:15 AM Perhaps the best "selfie" (if not the only one) written for the soup.....love the word play and humor herein.... Trevor Mcleod October 18, 2017 at 1:31 PM LOL Thanks John. I never considered that. LOL

Charlie Smith October 17, 2017 at 7:09 AM Fun stuff Trevor, congratulations for POTD honors... Trevor Mcleod October 18, 2017 at 1:32 PM Thanks Charlie. Appreciate that. Trevor

John Gondolf October 17, 2017 at 6:52 AM I'm not a psychiatrist but this sounds like a case of Dissociative Identity Disorder. Clever poem Trevor, congrats on the POTD! Trevor Mcleod October 18, 2017 at 2:23 PM LOL Only a sequel will tell. LOL Thanks John. Trevor

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 15, 2017 at 3:35 PM Tee hee love it, fave :) xomo! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 6:52 AM Congratulations on potd you guys! ;) Trevor Mcleod October 16, 2017 at 11:01 AM Thanks Maureen; from me myself and I. Trevor

Darlene De Beaulieu October 15, 2017 at 2:31 PM Hello Trevor nice to meet you. This poem is clever. Like it. Have a nice day my friend. Trevor Mcleod October 16, 2017 at 10:58 AM Thanks Darlene. I appreciate the comment. Trevor