Don Johnson Poet Free verse

Me Last Hour

Me last hour

Unhappy guy, though I will die,
Soon be long forgotten,
Doesn’t really matter ,
Rotten cancer is the why.

They showed me the xray,
Me liver has it yes,
Bones are almost rotten,
With cancer’s sour caress.

Doctors say use radium,
I say piddle off or worse,
A few hevvy pain killers,
Look out here comes the hearse.

Don Johnson  20-july-11

Robb A. Kopp Contest Name:"My Last Hour"

death don't want me baby doll,
healthy as a hogn moll,
guess i get into playin the part,
and friends have died the hurtin part...
loves ya blue,
Don

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Debbie Guzzi August 10, 2011 at 8:05 PM DON thanks for the comment on mt tanka BUT [don't tell] I'd like to give all those military buggers the bird big time! shhhh don't tell! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi July 25, 2011 at 5:37 PM still rhyming dear old coot! Robb would do a death contest LOL do you remember the Comedy group Firesign Theater [might have bee side?] google it it will make you laugh [I hope this poem is NOT real!!!] Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown July 20, 2011 at 5:22 AM Wishing you the best in the contest and with all your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Don. Love, Carol

Paul Beadnall July 20, 2011 at 4:29 AM Brilliantly penned out. Cancer has showed it`s face on my family, and a few friends. Know exactly where you`re coming from. Paul Beadnall July 20, 2011 at 5:13 AM Thank you for kind,caring comment and top marking on my poem " Gone but never forgotten" Bless you my mate .