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Me Last Hour

Me last hour Unhappy guy, though I will die, Soon be long forgotten, Doesn’t really matter , Rotten cancer is the why. They showed me the xray, Me liver has it yes, Bones are almost rotten, With cancer’s sour caress. Doctors say use radium, I say piddle off or worse, A few hevvy pain killers, Look out here comes the hearse. Don Johnson 20-july-11 Robb A. Kopp Contest Name:"My Last Hour" death don't want me baby doll, healthy as a hogn moll, guess i get into playin the part, and friends have died the hurtin part... loves ya blue, Don

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Date: 8/10/2011 8:05:00 PM
DON thanks for the comment on mt tanka BUT [don't tell] I'd like to give all those military buggers the bird big time! shhhh don't tell! Light & Love
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Date: 7/25/2011 5:37:00 PM
still rhyming dear old coot! Robb would do a death contest LOL do you remember the Comedy group Firesign Theater [might have bee side?] google it it will make you laugh [I hope this poem is NOT real!!!] Light & Love
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Date: 7/20/2011 5:22:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest and with all your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:29:00 AM
Brilliantly penned out. Cancer has showed it`s face on my family, and a few friends. Know exactly where you`re coming from.
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/20/2011 5:13:00 AM
Thank you for kind,caring comment and top marking on my poem " Gone but never forgotten" Bless you my mate .

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