Notes About The Poem

Me, In Mom's Garden


I will turn back the old pages of time,
to mom's flowers and this little girl;
mom filled my pool and in I jumped,
she called me pixie and I giggled.
     Then she turned to her garden,
     trimming black-eyed susan;
     and white shasta daisies,
                             and we helped too.
        I had my own tools,
           I worked hard too;
she gave me a small patch in the sunshine,
with bright petunias and yellow marigolds.
Mom planted coneflowers for the monarchs,
I planted columbine for the hummingbirds;
                            and yarrow for bees,
     oh, I loved the garden.
          And I loved mom too,
and the lilies, blue bell flowers, and violets;
oh, that crazy creeping thyme,
this is a treasured page in the book of my life.

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June 20, 2016

Verse 

Submitted to the contest, New/Old 2
sponsor, Eve Roper

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 9:12 AM
- A great and lovely choice of your poems B.W., congratulations ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 7:21 AM
What a lovely memory to go back to, Constance...fresh, full of simplicity and innocence! Congratulations on placing first!! Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 11:31 PM
This is beautiful! Congratulations on your first place win Constance. Delightful! 7 : )
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your First Place win in Eve's the New/Old 2 contest! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations on you win, Broken Wings ! Hugs Eve
Arnone Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Delightfully descriptive, B. W. I remember a great number of monarchs (and other species) when I was a kid. Don't see them in abundance anymore. Congrats on your win!
Inman Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:52 AM
A very descriptive image filled write that is written with a gentle playfulness and tenderness. Well done BW.
Scars Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Broken Wings, wonderful imagery lady, good luck in the contest, this is wonderful :)-luloo
Teagan Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 8:50 AM
A sweet poem for this contest theme... such great memories you've described. Very nice, Constance.
Sathasivam Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 2:56 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Quigley Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Lovely! And very sweet.
Day Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 10:18 PM
You created an extraordinary scene from your memory. I enjoyed the simple descriptive tone and you worked in the imaginary elements to fit with what was real. Nicely written - Jesse
Eastman Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Sounds like great memories.... Great poem, too.
Daniel Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 5:54 AM
This is well done, Constance:) All the best:)
Kannan Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 9:59 PM
This is beautiful... Gud luck with the contest....
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