Me Being In the Country

I meander my way through the hills, noting the pretty violets.
Their daintiness delights me, so I sit, trying not to crush any.
An impossible task. While I am down here, I notice the morels.
My hand reaches past them to feel the bumpiness of the tree moss.

The sun has greeted me; I see a diagonal sun stream lighting the meadow.
I lean against the trunk of the oak and study the prettiness of this valley.
Since I was a child I always wanted to be a grandma and live in the country.
I never wanted to cook or bake, so I don’t.
I sit here, loving the sound of crickets.

Was that a frog? I get up to wander to the pond. There are minnows there.
I can practically feel the cool water on my fingers; I stare at my age spots.
When did I grow my grandmother’s hands? I wonder if I still have my freckles.
The ones grandpa used to tease me about when I was nine. I will look later.

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Date: 5/19/2022 6:32:00 PM
Such a reflective piece, Caren. I love the country too, but I wound up in the city... My heart is still in a small farming village in Israel. Tony Bennet and I left our hearts: His in S.F., mine in Sde Eliyahu. ~ Enjoy!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/20/2022 1:57:00 AM
I hope you can go back there, and now I wonder is that where your son is? You would have a great reason to go visit if this is the case.
Date: 5/19/2022 9:01:00 AM
Ah, Caren. I have my meadow. You have your valley and leaning "against the trunk of the oak." I hope you will share many more of these adventures with us.
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Date: 5/19/2022 12:16:00 PM
I have to admit I LOVE the country! LOVE IT!
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