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Me As a Car

Beige sport's car with fifty-nine thousand miles.
Rag top (original color - brown).
Engine still runs great, but frame might
need some work. Body ok.
Awesome wheels and front end.
Fuel efficient too.
Vintage model-
A must-see!
(Not for
sale.)

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John Watt

February 14, 2020 at 2:32 PM

Very cute write! I stumbled on this one looking for something else but I'm glad I found it! A lassie in a classy chassis...

James Inman

August 14, 2015 at 2:46 PM

My kind of car, Andrea. I looked into submitting my January poem for John's contest as you suggested but it wasn't long enough.

Poet Destroyer A

July 22, 2015 at 11:44 PM

Andrea, this is a nice little win. always ~LINDA~

Kim Merryman

July 15, 2015 at 8:27 PM

This is so cute, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

Aiyah Torres

July 14, 2015 at 8:45 PM

this is sooo good ,Andie :O)) you're such a great model of a car ^_^ Congrats !!! ^_6

Alexis Y.

July 14, 2015 at 1:43 AM

Hi Andrea, just stopping by to congratulate you on your win:) Alexis

Skat A

July 14, 2015 at 1:10 AM

you made me laugh with this one Andrea, super cool :)Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support. SKAT

Kash Poet

January 18, 2011 at 7:51 AM

Witty and cute write-kashinath

Wilma Neels

January 12, 2011 at 4:32 AM

OMW, I must tell my dad about you (this car) :) This really made me laugh out loud today.. first day back at work :) Hope your day will be a great one, love Wilma

Daver Austin

November 7, 2010 at 6:58 AM

Fifty-four thousand miles? Hell! This vintage car is practically new. What did you do, leave it out in the weather? The car I'm driving now has 160,000. I plan to drive it another 100,000. Am I distitute? Not quite. I'm a home body - only drive about 5 miles a day. Boy did I have to go near the end of the list to find this one. I like you poem and I would like for you a nice Sunday. Love, Dave

Skat A

March 18, 2010 at 2:50 PM

A fast race ..I like the image of the car in your write....

Matthew Anish

March 6, 2010 at 8:48 PM

Get ready to ride ahead! Nice use of this form! Keep it up! Love Matthew Anish

Debbie Guzzi

February 20, 2010 at 1:46 PM

Nice bumpers ;) Somone has been waiting for a call for 45min? I wonder who?

Edward Ford

February 19, 2010 at 6:59 PM

OMG that was awesome Andrea, I got the giggles now thanks a lot, that was so cute =)

Susan Palli

February 19, 2010 at 3:17 AM

precious

Robert A. Dufresne

February 14, 2010 at 7:33 PM

I don;t know what inspired you to write this poem but it is really good. Had to come back to it once again I get a kick out of it.. -Robert

Charmaine Chircop

February 14, 2010 at 2:23 PM

I enjoyed this poem to the core,It made me Smile:)..lovely conept,Original too.Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2010 at 11:59 AM

They say a person's car reflects their personality, Andrea. You sound like a vibrant woman! Excellent Etheree. Love, Carolyn (and good luck in the contest)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 13, 2010 at 9:00 PM

SOUP MAIL... notice I am number 12 comments.. u will understand when u read this Soup Mail... luv..

Marty Owens

February 13, 2010 at 6:10 PM

Sounds like one of my cars but it was green....lol P.S. Soup mail....Marty

Matthew Anish

February 13, 2010 at 5:00 PM

Reminds me of the song "Little Deuce Coupe" by the Beach Boys. Hope your engine is running well. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Dr Igor Von Graves

February 13, 2010 at 1:56 PM

im more of a pinto and once again like a cheap horror sequel i rise from the crypt once agian okay i may have needed a hand im getting old you know. good job and check out my newwest adventure as i howl at the moon not to loud i have neighbors and you know theres the whole disturbing the peace issue anyways good job Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 13, 2010 at 10:36 AM

OK u go girl... this is a great poem and a great entry... a perfect description of a classic original... my Pontiac LeMans was like that (only fire engine red) before I got my little champagne gold Toyota... (not a recall model) an ECHO ... luv your title girlfriend... unique ...and good luck in the contest... I think u read my entry Sports Nut Craze... luv.. LInda-Marie..