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Me As a Car

Beige sport's car with fifty-nine thousand miles.
Rag top (original color - brown).
Engine still runs great, but frame might
need some work. Body ok.
Awesome wheels and front end.
Fuel efficient too.
Vintage model-
A must-see!
(Not for
sale.)

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John Watt

Date: 2/14/2020 2:32:00 PM

Very cute write! I stumbled on this one looking for something else but I'm glad I found it! A lassie in a classy chassis...

James Inman

Date: 8/14/2015 2:46:00 PM

My kind of car, Andrea. I looked into submitting my January poem for John's contest as you suggested but it wasn't long enough.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2015 11:44:00 PM

Andrea, this is a nice little win. always ~LINDA~

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/15/2015 8:27:00 PM

This is so cute, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/14/2015 8:45:00 PM

this is sooo good ,Andie :O)) you're such a great model of a car ^_^ Congrats !!! ^_6

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/14/2015 1:43:00 AM

Hi Andrea, just stopping by to congratulate you on your win:) Alexis

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 1:10:00 AM

you made me laugh with this one Andrea, super cool :)Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support. SKAT

Kash Poet

Date: 1/18/2011 7:51:00 AM

Witty and cute write-kashinath

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/12/2011 4:32:00 AM

OMW, I must tell my dad about you (this car) :) This really made me laugh out loud today.. first day back at work :) Hope your day will be a great one, love Wilma

Daver Austin

Date: 11/7/2010 6:58:00 AM

Fifty-four thousand miles? Hell! This vintage car is practically new. What did you do, leave it out in the weather? The car I'm driving now has 160,000. I plan to drive it another 100,000. Am I distitute? Not quite. I'm a home body - only drive about 5 miles a day. Boy did I have to go near the end of the list to find this one. I like you poem and I would like for you a nice Sunday. Love, Dave

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2010 2:50:00 PM

A fast race ..I like the image of the car in your write....

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/6/2010 8:48:00 PM

Get ready to ride ahead! Nice use of this form! Keep it up! Love Matthew Anish

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2010 1:46:00 PM

Nice bumpers ;) Somone has been waiting for a call for 45min? I wonder who?

Edward Ford

Date: 2/19/2010 6:59:00 PM

OMG that was awesome Andrea, I got the giggles now thanks a lot, that was so cute =)

Susan Palli

Date: 2/19/2010 3:17:00 AM

precious

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/14/2010 7:33:00 PM

I don;t know what inspired you to write this poem but it is really good. Had to come back to it once again I get a kick out of it.. -Robert

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/14/2010 2:23:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem to the core,It made me Smile:)..lovely conept,Original too.Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2010 11:59:00 AM

They say a person's car reflects their personality, Andrea. You sound like a vibrant woman! Excellent Etheree. Love, Carolyn (and good luck in the contest)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 9:00:00 PM

SOUP MAIL... notice I am number 12 comments.. u will understand when u read this Soup Mail... luv..

Marty Owens

Date: 2/13/2010 6:10:00 PM

Sounds like one of my cars but it was green....lol P.S. Soup mail....Marty

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/13/2010 5:00:00 PM

Reminds me of the song "Little Deuce Coupe" by the Beach Boys. Hope your engine is running well. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Dr Igor Von Graves

Date: 2/13/2010 1:56:00 PM

im more of a pinto and once again like a cheap horror sequel i rise from the crypt once agian okay i may have needed a hand im getting old you know. good job and check out my newwest adventure as i howl at the moon not to loud i have neighbors and you know theres the whole disturbing the peace issue anyways good job Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 10:36:00 AM

OK u go girl... this is a great poem and a great entry... a perfect description of a classic original... my Pontiac LeMans was like that (only fire engine red) before I got my little champagne gold Toyota... (not a recall model) an ECHO ... luv your title girlfriend... unique ...and good luck in the contest... I think u read my entry Sports Nut Craze... luv.. LInda-Marie..

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/13/2010 9:56:00 AM

this was cute . it gave me alot of clues. must come and give it a spin. John H Loving III