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Beige sport's car with fifty-nine thousand miles. Rag top (original color - brown). Engine still runs great, but frame might need some work. Body ok. Awesome wheels and front end. Fuel efficient too. Vintage model- A must-see! (Not for sale.)

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Date: 2/14/2020 2:32:00 PM
Very cute write! I stumbled on this one looking for something else but I'm glad I found it! A lassie in a classy chassis...
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Date: 8/14/2015 2:46:00 PM
My kind of car, Andrea. I looked into submitting my January poem for John's contest as you suggested but it wasn't long enough.
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:44:00 PM
Andrea, this is a nice little win. always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:27:00 PM
This is so cute, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm
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Date: 7/14/2015 8:45:00 PM
this is sooo good ,Andie :O)) you're such a great model of a car ^_^ Congrats !!! ^_6
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Date: 7/14/2015 1:43:00 AM
Hi Andrea, just stopping by to congratulate you on your win:) Alexis
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Date: 7/14/2015 1:10:00 AM
you made me laugh with this one Andrea, super cool :)Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support. SKAT
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:51:00 AM
Witty and cute write-kashinath
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Date: 1/12/2011 4:32:00 AM
OMW, I must tell my dad about you (this car) :) This really made me laugh out loud today.. first day back at work :) Hope your day will be a great one, love Wilma
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:58:00 AM
Fifty-four thousand miles? Hell! This vintage car is practically new. What did you do, leave it out in the weather? The car I'm driving now has 160,000. I plan to drive it another 100,000. Am I distitute? Not quite. I'm a home body - only drive about 5 miles a day. Boy did I have to go near the end of the list to find this one. I like you poem and I would like for you a nice Sunday. Love, Dave
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Date: 3/18/2010 2:50:00 PM
A fast race ..I like the image of the car in your write....
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Date: 3/6/2010 8:48:00 PM
Get ready to ride ahead! Nice use of this form! Keep it up! Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/20/2010 1:46:00 PM
Nice bumpers ;) Somone has been waiting for a call for 45min? I wonder who?
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Date: 2/19/2010 6:59:00 PM
OMG that was awesome Andrea, I got the giggles now thanks a lot, that was so cute =)
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Date: 2/19/2010 3:17:00 AM
precious
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:33:00 PM
I don;t know what inspired you to write this poem but it is really good. Had to come back to it once again I get a kick out of it.. -Robert
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Date: 2/14/2010 2:23:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem to the core,It made me Smile:)..lovely conept,Original too.Charma
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Date: 2/14/2010 11:59:00 AM
They say a person's car reflects their personality, Andrea. You sound like a vibrant woman! Excellent Etheree. Love, Carolyn (and good luck in the contest)
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:00:00 PM
SOUP MAIL... notice I am number 12 comments.. u will understand when u read this Soup Mail... luv..
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Date: 2/13/2010 6:10:00 PM
Sounds like one of my cars but it was green....lol P.S. Soup mail....Marty
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Date: 2/13/2010 5:00:00 PM
Reminds me of the song "Little Deuce Coupe" by the Beach Boys. Hope your engine is running well. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/13/2010 1:56:00 PM
im more of a pinto and once again like a cheap horror sequel i rise from the crypt once agian okay i may have needed a hand im getting old you know. good job and check out my newwest adventure as i howl at the moon not to loud i have neighbors and you know theres the whole disturbing the peace issue anyways good job Andrea
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Date: 2/13/2010 10:36:00 AM
OK u go girl... this is a great poem and a great entry... a perfect description of a classic original... my Pontiac LeMans was like that (only fire engine red) before I got my little champagne gold Toyota... (not a recall model) an ECHO ... luv your title girlfriend... unique ...and good luck in the contest... I think u read my entry Sports Nut Craze... luv.. LInda-Marie..
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:56:00 AM
this was cute . it gave me alot of clues. must come and give it a spin. John H Loving III
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:22:00 AM
Hah. Hm, wouldn't that be nice. Great poem, i could see you being this car completely. Good Luck! -Always Lynette
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