Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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Me and You

Inside
	          half
of me bleeds
   part of me
               	  cries

resides

	          in darkness

a coma of fear
   solitary the tear

	         timeless

silent choir

	         angels
	         sing

mourning
flowers wet dew

	         solemn is the day

buried deep
within
desires

	        of sadness

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White Wolf November 24, 2018 at 9:05 PM The Great Bear

Billy Jones November 23, 2018 at 8:54 PM LOVED this, good work Art ~_°

White Wolf November 23, 2018 at 8:33 PM yes, me and you indeed! Sadly beautiful

Chris Green November 23, 2018 at 8:40 AM Unfortunately, I am very familiar with this feeling. Nicely done.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 23, 2018 at 8:01 AM Reads like a trickling tear. Lovely done. xomo

Jan Allison November 23, 2018 at 7:30 AM love the way you formatted this emotional piece Art, I read it as a stand alone piece, but it also reads well and makes sense as 2 separate poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2018 at 2:26 AM - A longing in your lines, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White November 23, 2018 at 1:01 AM That is such an emotional poem, so much sadness in there...