Me and You

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Inside half of me bleeds part of me cries resides in darkness a coma of fear solitary the tear timeless silent choir angels sing mourning flowers wet dew solemn is the day buried deep within desires of sadness

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White Wolf

Date: 11/24/2018 9:05:00 PM

The Great Bear

Billy Jones

Date: 11/23/2018 8:54:00 PM

LOVED this, good work Art ~_°

White Wolf

Date: 11/23/2018 8:33:00 PM

yes, me and you indeed! Sadly beautiful

Chris Green

Date: 11/23/2018 8:40:00 AM

Unfortunately, I am very familiar with this feeling. Nicely done.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/23/2018 8:01:00 AM

Reads like a trickling tear. Lovely done. xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 11/23/2018 7:30:00 AM

love the way you formatted this emotional piece Art, I read it as a stand alone piece, but it also reads well and makes sense as 2 separate poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2018 2:26:00 AM

- A longing in your lines, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White

Date: 11/23/2018 1:01:00 AM

That is such an emotional poem, so much sadness in there...