Me and My Imagination

Am lying on the beach with you sunbathing next to me
Talking about life in general especially art and poetry

Discussing forms and such makes one dry and thirsty
A long cold drink or two is perfect we agree

Talked about the contests how much fun the forms can be
About the different judges with all we don't agree

Not sure if i am dreaming, things seem a little blurred
Not quite in vision you could say, are we talking slurred

Dangerous things imagination, you must agree
Turns the world upside down after a glass or three

We decide to write a collaberwation 
But the werds, wurds, came out wong, rong

Had a nap, across the dunes the snores could be heard 
Not too melodical  were the comments, how absurd.

I woke up just in time before my imagination went to town
Imagining us as lovers, bet that turned your smile to frown


Penned by Seren Roberts on 18/05/2014

Dave Woods Contest - imagination.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 2:19 PM
My wurds r rong two
A   Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 7:55 AM
any time Seren...PD
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:30 PM
amazing poem Seren...PD
Roberts Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Thanks for commenting ...Seren
George   Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:10 PM
LOL!! Very Creative, Seren. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
Roberts Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:12 PM
Lol Lainie glad you enjoyed it....Seren
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:09 PM
:D!!! funny witty write.. :D i like the 3 last stanzas.. :! cute.. CONGRATULATIONS.. :) gbu
Roberts Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Thank you ....Seren
Onclaud Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:46 AM
more than a dreamy work; artistically done, seren.. warm congrats and huggs!
Roberts Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:15 PM
That's a nice thing to say Nette,thank you ....Seren
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:40 AM
You've got a lovely imagination, Seren! Loved the witty ending! Congrats on a fine win. // paul
Roberts Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Well it made people smile so mission accomplished ....Seren
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Such a beautifully written poem Seren a well deserved winner. hugs Jan xxx
Roberts Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:10 PM
Thanks Jan .....Seren
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 12:19 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, seren
Roberts Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 2:37 AM
Thanks Ram.....Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Wonderful Seren ! imagination is such a bliss,, congrats on huge win !
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Than you for your kindness in stopping by and commenting....Seren
Lindley Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Congrats on the win..
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:57 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting ... Seren
A   Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 2:59 AM
Good luck in Dave's contest...PD
Roberts Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 3:47 AM
Thanks PD was a fun write...Seren
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