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Me and My Imagination

Am lying on the beach with you sunbathing next to me Talking about life in general especially art and poetry Discussing forms and such makes one dry and thirsty A long cold drink or two is perfect we agree Talked about the contests how much fun the forms can be About the different judges with all we don't agree Not sure if i am dreaming, things seem a little blurred Not quite in vision you could say, are we talking slurred Dangerous things imagination, you must agree Turns the world upside down after a glass or three We decide to write a collaberwation But the werds, wurds, came out wong, rong Had a nap, across the dunes the snores could be heard Not too melodical were the comments, how absurd. I woke up just in time before my imagination went to town Imagining us as lovers, bet that turned your smile to frown Penned by Seren Roberts on 18/05/2014 Dave Woods Contest - imagination.

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Date: 5/29/2017 2:19:00 PM
My wurds r rong two
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Date: 5/31/2014 7:55:00 AM
any time Seren...PD
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:30:00 PM
amazing poem Seren...PD
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:11:00 PM
Thanks for commenting ...Seren
Date: 5/28/2014 4:10:00 PM
LOL!! Very Creative, Seren. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:12:00 PM
Lol Lainie glad you enjoyed it....Seren
Date: 5/28/2014 4:09:00 PM
:D!!! funny witty write.. :D i like the 3 last stanzas.. :! cute.. CONGRATULATIONS.. :) gbu
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:16:00 PM
Thank you ....Seren
Date: 5/28/2014 10:46:00 AM
more than a dreamy work; artistically done, seren.. warm congrats and huggs!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:15:00 PM
That's a nice thing to say Nette,thank you ....Seren
Date: 5/28/2014 10:40:00 AM
You've got a lovely imagination, Seren! Loved the witty ending! Congrats on a fine win. // paul
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:16:00 PM
Well it made people smile so mission accomplished ....Seren
Date: 5/28/2014 7:55:00 AM
Such a beautifully written poem Seren a well deserved winner. hugs Jan xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:10:00 PM
Thanks Jan .....Seren
Date: 5/28/2014 12:19:00 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2014 2:37:00 AM
Thanks Ram.....Seren
Date: 5/27/2014 11:00:00 PM
Wonderful Seren ! imagination is such a bliss,, congrats on huge win !
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 11:12:00 PM
Than you for your kindness in stopping by and commenting....Seren
Date: 5/27/2014 10:41:00 PM
Congrats on the win..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 10:57:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting ... Seren
Date: 5/18/2014 2:59:00 AM
Good luck in Dave's contest...PD
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/18/2014 3:47:00 AM
Thanks PD was a fun write...Seren

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