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Last born of three With loving and caring parents Although through life I could not see As I grew up To belong was my need Rejected by some Concentrating only on me Seeing what is not Was my deal Fearing the unknown Was all so real Each head is a world And mine was in turmoil The power I had Was shortchanged and soiled I did not fit in So I made it a point To fit in with all Even if it meant hurting me When at the time I didn’t realize That what I felt Was a normal life They could not adjust To my caring and empathy They all thought me weak And saw me with sympathy My family is all to me And being there is all I need To finally see that all the problems Don’t lie within me Yes I kept to my self And I hoped that no one saw All the sadness That came through me Yet life is short So I make the best of it Now knowing that This life is what I make of it Life goes by day by day And I now enjoy Waking up every day Full of love and joy I now know how to love Who to love and why I can truly say I LOVE and ACCEPT me!! A Diamond in the Rough. By: Nena Enriquez

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Date: 2/21/2011 3:40:00 PM
Congrats Maria Elena on the featured write "Me". Vince
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Maria. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2009 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2009 1:01:00 PM
Really nice heartwarming poem. It really does flow very nicely.
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Date: 7/30/2009 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Michael's contest! Truely a wonderful poem! ~*~ Trudy~*~
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Date: 6/30/2009 2:25:00 PM
Nena, excellent write, truly. It just flowed and flowed>>James
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:03:00 PM
I especially enjoyed the last line. In order to love and accept others we must first learn to love ourselves. Nice write
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Date: 5/20/2009 12:01:00 PM
SWEET CHILD OF SUCH PAIN YOU SPEAK T EXHROUGH YOUR WORDS I TOO BEEN THERE IN YOUR EXACT SITUATION AND I TOO HAD TO LEARN TO LOVE ME YOU HAVE A GIFT AND A TALENT OF EXPRESSING YOURSELF KEEP WRITING IT HELPS AND IM 33 SO I MEANT THE CHILD PART NO HARM:)
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